Reviews for Hollow, Misunderstood
tenzaichigo chapter 5 . 3/10/2011
That was good chapter keep it up.
Exdeamon chapter 4 . 3/10/2011
Hmm... alright, I'll review.

First, big improvement on the previous chapter. I have no idea how, but Chap. 2 was much more fun to read than Chap. 1. If you don't change anything, it should be fine.

I couldn't spot any grammatical errors you hadn't improved upon and/or corrected between the two chapters anyway, so skip that too...

This looks like a fun new take on things, at any rate. Alerted.

Keep writing, this thing has potential!
tenzaichigo chapter 4 . 3/4/2011
I personally think you did a good job with what you have so far.
Kohryu chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucks. Glad to know your well ne.

Now, onward with the show!
Sorrowful Reaper chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
So far i'm liking the story. Definitely can't wait for the next chapter.
Joseph-Alexander chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
Dude continue this plez i am wondering whats gona happen
snakeboy33 chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
Well, I'd be lying if I said this didn't have potential.

I hope you continue, and feel better.
Silverscale chapter 2 . 2/4/2011
Ouch I know how you feel, I hope you will be better soon.
khaoticryu chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
cant wait for the first chapter
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