|Reviews for Causality|
| Camilla10 chapter 4 . 9/1/2011
I saw this mentioned on A Different Forest and I had to read it. Delightful, as the Hedgehog film was, one of my favorite of all times.
It is also a lesson on how to keep the cake and eat it...
BTW, I went on your blog and loved the O/s on Edward returning from Isle Esme (I only read - and write - supernatural). But there was a message from a reader that intrigued me. It spoke of a fic I am following (Touching Solitude) and about rubber gloves. What is your connection with that?
| tricklem chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
Really like this short story. Would have like another chapter or 2 of Edward explaining what had been happening, the family's response, and Rosalie's reaction to Edward changing Bella and his love for her. Just a thought.
| prettyflour chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
Oh! I really enjoyed this! Well done!
| fangrl01 chapter 4 . 3/24/2011
I really enjoyed this story. You were a recommendation from Random Acts of Rob for which I am quite glad. Good stuff.
| jfk06 chapter 4 . 3/19/2011
This is a beautiful short story. I really really liked it! And I thought the Groundhog's day theme was awesome ;-) The funniest part? It NEVER occurred to me that the solution was to turn her! I assumed he had to woo her or kiss her or something like that. I have no idea why I was so dense.
But anyway, excellent job!
| jfk06 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Groundhog's day for Edward! Awesome :-D *reads more*
| amwine chapter 4 . 3/8/2011
I am glad it is over or...just beginning for them. This is a great little story! Thanks so much!
| amwine chapter 3 . 3/8/2011
Why would Alice do this? Why would she had Jasper do this? I hope his day really starts over and she is not gone for good this time. Great job...thanks!
| amwine chapter 2 . 3/8/2011
It breaks my heart he is going through this everyday. Maybe he is finally turning a corner now and will figure out what he needs to do, or not do...
| amwine chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I am glad he is getting a second chance! Great job...thanks!
| sersmom chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I found it on Melolabel's favorites list and decided to try it out. I loved "Groundhog Day" and this was just as fun. Thanks
| swimmer4 chapter 4 . 2/22/2011
Very interesting take on the whole Twilight scenerio. I liked it - alot. I see your reasoning for not wanting to continue this short offering, but one has to wonder at the possibilities.. However, this one fic did make me want to check out some of your other writing. Good job!
| love bite chapter 4 . 2/17/2011
What a beautiful fic. I was afraid it would be campy-rather like the Bill Murray movie. But, it was tragic and moving. And what a fantastic ending! I didn't predict that outcome at the start. Thanks for sharing!
| LBelle chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
Awesome story. Like in your beliefs, same as the plot in the movie, but with a twist. I also love the belief about the smut. Sometimes a lemon fits with the story, as in when Bella and Edward met in Coming To Terms. I hate when I'm skipping over lemons that have no impact on the plot because I want to get back to the story. This story was short and sweet. I enjoyed it very much. Glad you reposted it after I missed it the first time.
| Melolabel chapter 4 . 2/8/2011
I enjoyed reading this one again.