Reviews for An Opaque Heart
Silver Blur chapter 4 . 1/4/2015
This is a really cute story, even if you haven't updated in quite the time. Oh well. I like this anyways and will continue liking this! Even if it kills me! XD
Kongo Isamu chapter 4 . 10/20/2013
Please update this story, i really love it. I love Akira and how u protray Toua. Please update soon. I will however long just for u to update this story!
FunkEater chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Hm... this story was last updated two years ago so I probably shouldn't expect an update but... PLEASE UPDATE. PUH-LEAAAASE. This is probably the best out of 's very much scarce supply of One Outs Fanfics. The development is natural and it isn't very hard to picture Toua getting along with someone like Akira and I'd really like to see what happens next between them, plus I also want to see what became of the others.

But anyways, thank you thank you thank you for writing this story!

-Iggy
Keyblade Princess 13 chapter 4 . 3/7/2013
I like it. U should totally continue this story. Its good and has great potential. So please. Continue it. Peace out. Have a nice, none abusive day.
Mnaja chapter 4 . 11/7/2012
Oh oh oh Tokuchi.
"..but your confidence in me is pleasing."
I love that line : )
Please keep writing! The more good One Outs fanfiction, the better!
Mnaja chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
OMG I really like this! Your character is really cool and Tokuchi is written awesomely ) This might be my favorite so far!
Only one little nitpick-it doesn't snow in Okinawa! But still- gambling and yakuza! I'm so excited!
Fruitlessberry chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Wow! This is amazing! I love your FF. I also like your oc. She seems pretty cool and strong! It was pure epicness,on her side, as she beat those guys!

Ps; Please update.
Micky Moon chapter 4 . 12/16/2011
(Too lazy to log in.)

But wow. ” Okay...this story was...lovely. I love Ones Out so seeing a piece of this is a delight. There are some grammar mistakes and typos you might want to check over though. Cliches were also heavily used and, I'm sorry, I had to cringe at that.

But great storyline! I loved the chemistry between the couple (can't remember their names...). Their relationship seemed so natural and way to make Touichi (misspelled, gomen) more...human. Ones Out doesn't really reveal more characterization than it should so your piece really filled the problem the manga faced.

You haven't updated in a very longtime but I really hope that you do since this is a very wonderful story.
Pyrane chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
I'm looking foward the next chapter

Think of us from time to time !

***Pyrane***
mute-by-choice chapter 4 . 12/14/2011
I was really happy to see this. I'm a big fan of One Outs so I was overjoyed to see a good fanfiction for it.
dark-driex-07 chapter 4 . 10/5/2011
please!

update!
dark-driex-07 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
i love the story please update it...

one outs is one of my favorites...

please update... it is really good and not to be wasted...

please update...
miss.nixxy chapter 4 . 6/22/2011
Great story! Please update it soon!(:
SuzuranCrow23 chapter 4 . 6/11/2011
Awesome fanfic : ) There's not that many one outs fanfictions on here, even though it's a great anime. I can't wait to see what happens next, hope you update soon _
pandarius chapter 4 . 5/24/2011
YOU! YOU! You have NO idea how happy this makes me!

there are barely any one outs fanfics, and none of them have updated in a while, and to see this.. FOUR WHOLE CHAPTERS~~! of awesomeness! I friggin LOVE you!

Be careful not to make Akira too much of a Mary sue though~

otherwise, it's very well done!
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