|Reviews for And Her White Cloak Faded|
| readergirl223 chapter 53 . 9/20
thus was the best storie i have ever read omg that was so good is there a segual
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/27
this whole preferring girl over boy is totally absurd you shouldn't have discussed this matter in your fiction this only proves how shallow minded you are. maybe you were wronged being a girl but that doesn't give you the right to pass judgment on the opposite are equal and should have left the discussion only at the gender revelation and not extending it to the differences and making your writing biased.
| Dudeyourcool chapter 1 . 4/14
Dude I love your writing and I think you are so cool!
| Guest chapter 53 . 3/30
Did I ever told you that you're freaking awesome? Well yeah you are! I will be patient for the sequel.. I will try to be patient. :)
| Roth'nBeau chapter 53 . 3/13
Pleease... more. If this is the end, it would suck. The story would suck all itself.. I want more
| DramioneLover21 chapter 53 . 2/14
Talk about a cliffhanger! Please write more!
| Guest chapter 53 . 2/2
| geekchich9000 chapter 5 . 12/29/2014
has anyone else's seen what big a jerk of robin is I see we're he is coming from but idk
| Kimarys Adriana chapter 53 . 12/6/2014
I knew Bruce started that fire! She should tell lydia and BB so they know lydia did a perfect job with the elephant. I wonder what starfire will say/do when she finds the letter. Also, i REALLY want Austin to have powers. He can't look like that and not have powers. It's way too cruel. Plus it would be awesome for the story if random unexplainable things happened and it was really him. PLEASE give Austin his powers! They are his birth right
| Mcdonaldsduck chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
Looneytunes are NOT PG. PG13 at least
| shugokage chapter 53 . 11/4/2014
Wow impressive chapter!
| BartWLewis chapter 53 . 11/4/2014
Awesome ending. To a awesome story.
Are you going to write a sequel or something?
| dj25taz chapter 53 . 11/3/2014
I loved every minute of this chapter wow
| Dixxy chapter 53 . 11/3/2014
(ALL IS FORGIVEN)
January... November... Jeez, 2014 probably is the worst year for AHWCF, with two chapters out only ! I was sad that nothing more came round. BUT, i'll speak my heart out and say that i'm most happy for ya, dear Laura, coz it sounds like ya had some quality time wz that Aussie, and that yea therefore was happy for a good part of the year, chatting wz him, and then meeting him in person in July. So if your being happy has for aftermath the consequent delay of the update, then so be it ! My friends' happiness matters more than their stories, of course, and knowing ya experienced bliss this year make me happy, and absolutely lenient for your extremely long delay. So, as it it, ALL IS FORGIVEN, and i'm happy about your happiness ! Yet, yes, it damn suxxxx ya two leave so far away from each other...
Review time now ?
So, you mentioned 'last chapter' in the foreword to this chappy, but did it relate to THIS chapter or to the NEXT ONE (that is, IF there is a next one...) ? From the ending of this one here, it may seem that it could be the end : they reunited and dealt away with their resentment and anger, leaving on a positive note, even for Raven. And also, there is not afterword to this chapter, while there always was up to now. These elements tip the scales in favor of this being the final chapter. And yet... Yet, you didn't write "THE END" at the... end of the chapter, and didn't put a note explaining that the story is over. These 2 elements, on the contrary, make me think that at least 1 more chapter is coming. So yeah, i'm torn between 2 antipodal as to the final chapter : this one or the next one ?
I was wondering why Raven kept seeing her mother's ghost. Is it somehow her conscience at work ? I'm not sure i get these apparitions the right way. But i did appreciate the reasonable speech Arella had.
Also nice was Garfield trying his best to explain "adults' serious matter" and comfort her... with Raven listening through the door, and intervening every now & then ! ;)
Interesting as well, with an insight of what the future holds for Cyborg and Bumblebee, who will welcome children with power, and make the Tower a home for supernatural ones.
And nostalgia's bittersweet scent, naturally. First, as a premonitory sign of the Titans reunion for dinner, as Starfire recalls Raven teaching her meditation, Cyborg showing her how to eat, BB morphing into a green kitten ask. And second, during said Titans reunion, with them evoking old memories, sweet recollections, all anger and grudges forgotten. Here as well, ALL IS FORGIVEN ! They were reunited, as they used to be, almost as if nothing had happened. Now if THAT isn't nostalgic enough, dunno what is...?
And then, the final goodbye. With the Logans crying their hearts out as the helicopter takes off... After all the tensions, all the wrath, all the resentment, all the frustration, all the mercilessness, they still managed to overcome obstacles that seemed insurmountable to let Friendship's sun break through the clouds of bitterness and shine again for everybody. But of course, the most sublime is the 'farewell' message Raven creates with her powers and lets them see in the sky ! THIS was extremely touching : it shows she got over her past anger, her past hostility, and put Friendship bonds from the past above anything else. That the memories of all the good times they all had lived were definitely stronger than the last rotten part they had endured. Raven's gesture was absolutely moving, and confined to the sublime, the "grandiose", making this chapter (and the story...?) finish on a brilliant emotional note.
Honestly, would the story end here, i would be satisfied, as that last moment on the roof, with the empath's magnificent attention, would be a marvelous way to put the final dot to a marvelous story. But maybe you have even better, and even more touching, to end your great fiction...?
Wait and see...
But, as always, i clap my hands (...until they bleed...) at this gem of a fiction, which is, psychologically and emotionally, one of the finest i've read in the TT archive. Only authoress PHANTOM OF RUNES could
move me that much, with her beautiful stories. Really, Laura, you can be so proud of yourself ! You've outdone yourself with this superb creation that AND HER WHITE CLOAK FADED is ! Definitely your best, although all of your stories were worth reading ! :)
I wish you all the best, especially sentimentally-wise, with that Aussie you became fond of. Difficult to say if it'll work out, given the distance... but i still wish it will !
And, if this wasn't the final chapter after all, we'll be in touch again someday... for another wonderful chapter to this wonderful story !
Be as happy as you possibly can !
) Léo (
| JasonVUK chapter 53 . 11/3/2014
:c Such sad feelings! DX Ooohhh I am having the heartache!