Reviews for The Caucus Race
webtail chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Haha, I like the title. The reference to Alice in Wonderland made me read it. :)
inkdotblot chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
:D I like! I could totally imagine the Will thinking like this, especially since she's definitely merciless enough to see all of the little humans like little mice.
pinkhearter13 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Beautiful prose! Reading this sent chills down my spine, honestly, and I love how you leave things in mysteries. We aren't really sure who you're talking about, though we think we do at times, and we aren't even sure if you're talking about one person. Several characters can be linked to many of the insights you made. I found it very interesting and deep.

I hope you write more in the future!
the sky's bouquet chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Oh my, this was just lovely.

Alyss is such a careful, broken character that it brings this delicious shiver whenever she is looked into.
obsession is odd chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Very beautiful, I love this I can see why it was fun making this, even I have those feelings when making dark fics :)