Reviews for Naruto wind god
I know stuff chapter 3 . 12/19/2017
I tried reading this, i really did, i wanted to stop at the first chapter but i didnt, this story is so much garbage i cant get past the third chapter, i really hope you get A LOT better at writing because i liked the faint concept i could see behind the story, but its so poorly written that i just cant keep reading
Kingkong101 chapter 14 . 10/25/2017
You lack a lot of imagination
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2017
THIS STORY LACK DIRECTION AND STRUCTURE. IT WAS A GOOD IDEA TO COME UP WITH BUT ABSOLUTELY NOTHING MAKES SENSE
Rebmul chapter 2 . 7/19/2017
what ever reason they have is still a shit reason to neglect your child it dosnt take 2 of you to train her and you could have made shadow clones and alternated between them.
Light 'Kira' Yagami chapter 10 . 5/8/2017
wtf? this chapter hahahah my god i feel like this is now a crack fic hahahaha
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 4 . 4/26/2017
Okay now I know you are not an actual fan of Naruto. Orochimaru would have started planning to kill Naruto as soon as possible. Also Tobi aka Obito can't use Ameratsu. His Mangekyous abilities are Kamui and Susanoo. Then there's the fact you think Mokuton is an Earth jutsu when its Wood. That jutsu should say Wood Style:Deep Earth Creation jutsu.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 3 . 4/26/2017
First eww at you have an 8 year old boy checking out girls boobs. The fact he can tell their sizes is worse. Then you actually have the balls to say the Hiraishin is a bloodline is fucking sad. Its a spacetime jutsu using seals. It was originally created and used by the Nidaime but was mastered by Minato. And What Water Ability? The only ability other than being a jinchurriki that Kushina had is her chakra chains. And that's apparently not unique to her. So the only thing special about Naruto family line is the names.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 2 . 4/26/2017
There's no way Naruto could use Bankai if using Shunpo or Sonido he couldn't outrun Kakashi or Gai. Also he could have used Getsuga Tensho when Zangetsu was in shikai form so why wait till after he uses Bankai?
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 1 . 4/26/2017
First of all is all your knowledge about Naruto and Bleach from a shitty wiki page? Cause you don't seem to understand some things about both stories. Like if Naruto picked up the Hogyoku and gained Aizens memories why does he get Zangetsu which is Ichigos blade rather than Aizens?
Guest chapter 3 . 4/20/2017
Please kill yourself.
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 8 . 3/17/2017
Again, Ryo dumbass.
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 5 . 3/17/2017
Civilians wouldn't know about the rankings of missions you idiot.
Emperor-Aurora chapter 17 . 11/25/2016
And how the hell is this complete? Seems more like you gave up and that's why you're not around anymore.
LoneWriter091 chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
Wind God? Seems original enough and most logically based on the canon. The fanfics that Naruto is OP as hell is still good to read but a Naruto with all five Elements affinities? Da Fuck? Now i know he was mean to be godlike but that is just overkill. However, a Naruto with his canon affinity but put to the extreme to be called wind god with the Hogyoku and Zangetsu? That's god to read!
Emperor-Aurora chapter 8 . 6/17/2016
Ryo, dumbass.
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