Reviews for School Spirit
Hoppy159 chapter 9 . 4/18
This is definitely a story to add to my favorites. You captured the dry wit of Harry Dresden and passed it on to Harry Potter in your writing. I love Jim Butcher's writing style, you've really got it down. I hope to see some updates someday soon, if your still writing. It's really a fun story when told Dresden style.
Chris chapter 9 . 4/17
Brilliant story, Superb use of the sarcastic Dresden in Potter's shoes, and a believable description of the different Magic's.

I had to stop myself from reading it at 3am in the morning here, otherwise I would have been a zombie at work the next morning.

If you are not a writer, you should be.

I would seriously suggest pitching it to both J.K. Rowling and Jim Butcher and their various publishing houses as a novel in its own right.

And finally and not the least, please return to it and finish it, to be honest I am wishing for the next 7 books as well.
bearblue chapter 9 . 3/17
This, so far, has been a great read. Thank you for sharing it and I look forward to more should you choose to share it. :)
SilverBladeStar chapter 9 . 2/11
Great story. Too bad it is dead.
phazer11 chapter 9 . 2/9
Great story. Pity there isn't more. Interesting hook in to the Dresden Files.
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 12/28/2014
its a shame this fic was forgotten, if it had contiuned it would rank up there with HPMOR
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 12/28/2014
nice job on the troll, you capture the DF style of fights well, though your soulgaze could use a bit of work
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 12/28/2014
nice take on early classes, i like how snape is portrayed in particular: messing around with chemicals is dangerous even with muggle ones, and magic ups the danger levels of everything. snapes a mean old bastard but that doesnt mean that he's evil or even unjustified in his criticism
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 12/28/2014
interesting take on the sorting, and its good to see that dresden's love and aptitude for humor rubbed off on his young protege
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 12/28/2014
yay for a rationalist look at magic, i bet theorist!harry will be fast friends with hermione: rons probably going to get the short end of the stick
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
its good to see that harry caught on to the discrepancies between his knowlege of magic and the worlds: and harry's wand is going to be scary awesome when its done
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 12/28/2014
its good that harry is getting full use out of his legacy. hagrids nice enough, but is woefully inadequate when it comes to preparing a kid for schooling
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
thats an interesting take on the crossover, dresden's experiences makes harry far less naive, and DF magic makes for a nice ace up potters sleeves
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
voldemort was an idiot to piss off the endless, there are ways to live far beyond the human lifespan in the gaimanverse but cheating is no fun for anyone involved
Benji-C chapter 9 . 11/13/2014
Don't know if you are still around on this site, however I would really like a chapter update if you are. This story idea is gold. In fact if I ever decide to try my hand at fanfiction agian I might just steal this idea.
So, to summerize: great story, want more, might steal your idea, are you still alive?
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