Reviews for Coincidental Major
QueenGB chapter 35 . 5/20/2022
That was a delightful and delicious treat. Thank you!
QueenGB chapter 34 . 5/20/2022
So, so good. I’m glad you gave us more of his recovery here in his pov. I just wish we had a little more. I’m not ready to say goodbye. Good on you then. Good on you. Be well.
QueenGB chapter 32 . 5/20/2022
Sounds like a dream inspired by a Salvador Dali painting.
QueenGB chapter 31 . 5/19/2022
Our warrior Edward! Please don’t take away his dream of hockey. He’s earned it. Bella was pretty badass too in her pov of this event.
QueenGB chapter 30 . 5/19/2022
So I read Bella’s pov of what’s next and I want to know is he ever going to play hockey again? Hockeyward is smoking hot. Will he have his memory from that blow to he head? An amazingly romantic day turned to shit. Change is right Edward.
QueenGB chapter 27 . 5/19/2022
TF y’all. New Moon drove me crazy. His martyrdom and her lack of faith. These two rock! ;-)
QueenGB chapter 25 . 5/19/2022
Hey everybody we just met crazy. Here we go. Yeah the whole story needs to be told to Bella Edward because she will never know the seriousness if you don’t tell her about the assault. And how is he not in juvy? Three witnesses saw him assault a girl the police wouldn’t need her to press charges for him to be put away. By the way, the supply closet and yes even his temper was hella sexy. You’re good.
QueenGB chapter 23 . 5/18/2022
Ah James, I had a feeling he would show up I can’t say I’m pleased but he is the best psycho. I hope he doesn’t become obsessed with Bella.
QueenGB chapter 16 . 5/16/2022
My goodness if these to get naked it’s going to be hawt! *fans self* They (you/your writing) make me miss kissing. Good toe curling kissing. Bravo!
QueenGB chapter 15 . 5/16/2022
I love being in his head. Sauce indeed!
QueenGB chapter 13 . 5/14/2022
Running with Carlisle hysterical. And he was sexy on his skates. And yes again I beg please let him share a sweet kiss.
QueenGB chapter 12 . 5/13/2022
I don’t need a lemon to fall in love with a story but let these sweet babies have a first kiss already will ya. ;-)
QueenGB chapter 11 . 5/13/2022
Don’t get me wrong I LOVE both stories and both Bella and Edward in them too. They are so sweet and lovely you absolutely cheer them on but please, please give these kids a break. Please let them kiss after his ritual. And by the way, her being there absolutely changes the ritual hmm?
QueenGB chapter 8 . 5/12/2022
Emmett and Rosalie were great and I rarely if ever say that.
QueenGB chapter 7 . 5/12/2022
Because I’m reading both stories at the same time this UST is painful. Phew…
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