What an EXCELLENT story ! I love it ! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Not sure how i missed both these his and her stories. They are just wonderful! Thank you

I have loved this companion piece. I have a handful of questions though. Edward was what 16 when he slept with Carole who I'm assuming is either 19 or 20. That gave me a smidge of ick. I know consent in WA is 16 so I can assume then it's technically legal.
Just with how protective Rose is I'm shocked that was she was cool with it

I've reread this fic like 1000000000000000000000000 times and i will read it 10000000000 times more, i love it so much and ik u probs wont ever see this but I love you and this story.
Ilove it so much I want fanfics of this fanfic kms

That was a delightful and delicious treat. Thank you!

So, so good. I’m glad you gave us more of his recovery here in his pov. I just wish we had a little more. I’m not ready to say goodbye. Good on you then. Good on you. Be well.

Sounds like a dream inspired by a Salvador Dali painting.

Our warrior Edward! Please don’t take away his dream of hockey. He’s earned it. Bella was pretty badass too in her pov of this event.

So I read Bella’s pov of what’s next and I want to know is he ever going to play hockey again? Hockeyward is smoking hot. Will he have his memory from that blow to he head? An amazingly romantic day turned to shit. Change is right Edward.

TF y’all. New Moon drove me crazy. His martyrdom and her lack of faith. These two rock! ;-)

Hey everybody we just met crazy. Here we go. Yeah the whole story needs to be told to Bella Edward because she will never know the seriousness if you don’t tell her about the assault. And how is he not in juvy? Three witnesses saw him assault a girl the police wouldn’t need her to press charges for him to be put away. By the way, the supply closet and yes even his temper was hella sexy. You’re good.

Ah James, I had a feeling he would show up I can’t say I’m pleased but he is the best psycho. I hope he doesn’t become obsessed with Bella.

My goodness if these to get naked it’s going to be hawt! *fans self* They (you/your writing) make me miss kissing. Good toe curling kissing. Bravo!

I love being in his head. Sauce indeed!

Running with Carlisle hysterical. And he was sexy on his skates. And yes again I beg please let him share a sweet kiss.