Reviews for Coincidental Major
SabLuvsLogan chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
I'm loving this! Can't wait for more :D

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So I had some time on my hands and you don't seem to have one yet so I made you a banner I hope you like it :) (just remove all the spaces and xx's )

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Elsiii93 chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
I like this so much! I have always had a weak spot for EPOV, so this story is just heaven to me :)
suzyq402 chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Too cute! Love me some awkward teenage Edward!
mjwpg chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
OMG that was hilarious his version of her feeling him up in class, too funny...

This is going to be so awesome as I do my happy dance, love love love this story! Okay yeah I'm a little excited, lol.
KJsMom chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Loving this...liked Major conduct..no LOVED Major Conduct. SO...thanks for this!
abw05 chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
I love reading this from his pov. So Bella didn't realze she was touching the goods? And love reading that he had a crush on her for so long. love it.
katmom chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Shudder...Lauren and Tanya...

but then SMILING for the rest of the chapter...

Oh my...I loved that TOUCH from his point of view...so FUNNY!

Now...I guess I'm just going to have to go back and reread the FIRST story...

NOT a hardship!

Thank you for this!

Kathie
u2shay chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Hehe! Edward is so adorable! I love how insecure he is! Poor Bella has no idea! You are reminding me why it was that I loved MM SO much!

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Shay

PS. I'd forgotten just how "wandering" Bella's hands were! LOL
interested party chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
I'm so, so ridiculously happy that you are writing the EPOV for this story! It's always been one of my true favorites - so well-written and sweet and sexy and real. And now we get his side, which is already hilarious and sexy! Can't wait for the rest. I treated myself and went back and reread Major and loved it just as much and was glad for the refresher with the start of this one.

Thanks!
Cullenfan524 chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
That was so awesome! I am gonna have to go back and read the corresponding chapters in MM! I am really enjoying this!
Edlovesme chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Hilarious, I remember Bella's reaction when she thought she felt him up. Can't wait for more.
Lilypad10 chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Loved it, loved it! Edards pov is great and I cannoit wait for the next chapter I had forgotten the touching in class and it made he laugh again.
jerseyhalliwell chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
It's like reading a new but still amazing story all over again :)

I've been meaning to ask - is there any chance of a future take or two with this story? I love the FGB piece ( I read it pretty often cause it always makes me smile, especially the end!) and I'm still holding out hope for more of future hockeyward and his bella :)
pipelynn chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
so so cute! i love this edward! nnw i want to go back and read this chapter im MM because i can't remember why Bella ran her hand up his leg in class...
hotmama4jd chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
There are a few scenes I have dying to read from EPOV - the thigh grabbing scene was definitely one. I am also anxious to read the clueless-Bella-shoots-down-Edward's-invitation-to-the-dance scene. Well, I am sort of dreading that scene. It made me cringe when I read it BPOV, I would imagine it will kill me to read it in EPOV. Sigh.

I am also dying to read the scene where Edward wins the where-to-sleep bet and they have fuckhot sex on his couch. That scene in EPOV? Ummmmm. Steamy!
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