|Reviews for Coincidental Major|
| Summer Leah chapter 14 . 5/17/2014
You know, the irony is that I'm reading this story while the Rangers embarrass the Canadiens in the background. My Caps didn't make the playoffs, but I wasn't willing to go a full 6 months without watching hockey. What's your team?
| Summer Leah chapter 15 . 5/17/2014
Wow, it's like you designed your Edward to be perfect for ME. Hockey-playing, Italian-speaking, "As-you-wish/I-love-you"-Princess-Bride-reference-making competitive funny hot hormonal human perfection-plus gentlemanly and all the other traits that make us all love the original Edward . . . gah. PLUS being able to compose music & play guitar and piano . . . a fantastic singing voice is the ONLY thing I can think of that could POSSIBLY make him more appealing.
| Summer Leah chapter 13 . 5/17/2014
Ha that thing with the rookie was hilarious! Imagine getting a "friendly little face wash" from your idol! LOL. In answer to your earlier question about girls liking a hockey story, I am definitely a HUGE hockey fan. (Go Caps!) Have been since I was about 10, & I've gone through a few serious, dedicated hockey crushes since puberty. What can I say? I like my men on ice! (By the way, I'm so glad you have Edward playing physical, offensive defense! I much prefer superstar defensemen and gritty grinders to hotshot forwards.)
| chuzzlewit16 chapter 35 . 4/21/2014
Awww the ending was soooo cute... I really enjoyed reading this... This story is my favorite one I've ever read so good job!
| LaPumuckl chapter 35 . 4/16/2014
These last three chaps alone made reading cm so worth it! I liked and loved most of his POV too, but these were the cherry on my pie
| LaPumuckl chapter 28 . 4/15/2014
Poor Edward... Getting locked between your mums Brest at seventeen, not the best place to be;)
| LaPumuckl chapter 27 . 4/13/2014
I understand why he would consider leaving her, but she was absolutely right on her argument as well;)
| LaPumuckl chapter 20 . 4/12/2014
Gotta love Esme!
| LaPumuckl chapter 18 . 4/11/2014
So very good!
| LaPumuckl chapter 14 . 4/11/2014
If that isn't a mood killer...
| LaPumuckl chapter 12 . 4/11/2014
Oh boy... He's so sweet and caring...
| LaPumuckl chapter 9 . 4/11/2014
It's awesome to see how happy he is from just thre little letters;)
| LaPumuckl chapter 8 . 4/10/2014
Even if it doesn't really look like it to the obvious eye, both Rose and Emmett surely care a lot about Edward!
| LaPumuckl chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
| LaPumuckl chapter 5 . 4/10/2014
Getting shut over the wrong choice if a date is bad, but for only looking is evil... Teenagers can be so cruel:(