Reviews for Jail Bird
pikaace chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Aw yeah! If anyone can convince the gov that Dan's innocent it's Rorshach! Please update this! I really wanna see where this goes! Pretty please so we can watchs Rorshcach save his best friend?
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Rose Unspindle chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Please tell me your going to update this, pretty please.
12ofHearts chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
It occurs to me that I wouldn't mind seeing Frumpy Daniel Dreiberg wailing on a few inmates. Like the breakout scene, but better.
Tulip chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
More Please? I cannot wait to see what is going to happen! Rorschach is going to have to be careful, if he pursues this to vigorously (although it'd be hard to tell with him) the cops might start a wonderin'. So exciting!
Darkling chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I really love this story. And I can hardly wait to find out what Dan will be doing in the prison. And Rorschah...
Guardian Fox chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
hey. love the premise. hope more is coming. also, I really liked the line "you'd be suprised what people can hide under timid exterriors" (or something like that). made me laugh. keep going.
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I'm enjoying the mystery and suspense surrounding the plot. I love the common past Rorschach and Danial have, and yet how all the years in between has made them almost nothing more than acquaintances. Rorschach had to have a reason like Daniel getting accused for murder for him to talk to his former partner. I can't wait for an update! (PS great title by the way, it's partially what first drew me in).
ShoeychocolatXD chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
now YOU HAVE to finish this :)
Golumfryingeggs chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Yish! Please, please, please, please continue! I love(d) Night Watch and I love this! Brilliant idea, brilliant writing and just brilliant in its entirety!

Continue... NOW! lol

Great job, keep it up!

insanely yours

MostVerbose chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
... please? :)
Cyberbutterfly chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Well... YES- you SHOULD be working on Night Watch... (damnit- I need closer!)

HOWEVER... You've know sucked me into this story as well... Which means you can leave this one alone either (hey, you brought this on yourself, you know)

I Love the idea of Dan being accused of murder and Rorschach being the one to bail him out... I also really enjoyed the little moment you put in there when Dan thinks Rorschach is their to beat HIM to death... It's strangly... Endearing... of the character.