Reviews for Jail Bird |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw yeah! If anyone can convince the gov that Dan's innocent it's Rorshach! Please update this! I really wanna see where this goes! Pretty please so we can watchs Rorshcach save his best friend? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me your going to update this, pretty please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It occurs to me that I wouldn't mind seeing Frumpy Daniel Dreiberg wailing on a few inmates. Like the breakout scene, but better. |
![]() ![]() More Please? I cannot wait to see what is going to happen! Rorschach is going to have to be careful, if he pursues this to vigorously (although it'd be hard to tell with him) the cops might start a wonderin'. So exciting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. And I can hardly wait to find out what Dan will be doing in the prison. And Rorschah... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey. love the premise. hope more is coming. also, I really liked the line "you'd be suprised what people can hide under timid exterriors" (or something like that). made me laugh. keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying the mystery and suspense surrounding the plot. I love the common past Rorschach and Danial have, and yet how all the years in between has made them almost nothing more than acquaintances. Rorschach had to have a reason like Daniel getting accused for murder for him to talk to his former partner. I can't wait for an update! (PS great title by the way, it's partially what first drew me in). |
![]() ![]() ![]() now YOU HAVE to finish this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yish! Please, please, please, please continue! I love(d) Night Watch and I love this! Brilliant idea, brilliant writing and just brilliant in its entirety! Continue... NOW! lol Great job, keep it up! insanely yours gollumfryingeggs |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... please? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... YES- you SHOULD be working on Night Watch... (damnit- I need closer!) HOWEVER... You've know sucked me into this story as well... Which means you can leave this one alone either (hey, you brought this on yourself, you know) I Love the idea of Dan being accused of murder and Rorschach being the one to bail him out... I also really enjoyed the little moment you put in there when Dan thinks Rorschach is their to beat HIM to death... It's strangly... Endearing... of the character. |