Reviews for Unrequited II
SoulCatcher12 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Ahh... Time for some constructive criticisms! It's great that you've returned and are updating more frequently, but this short story seems to not be quite as good as your others. It looks a bit rushed and choppy and I couldn't really get into it. Also: "You're father wishes to have a word with you."

Sorry, I couldn't let that one error go without cringing. I felt like this story should have been an added chapter to the original 'Unrequited'. These are just the opinions of a dedicated reader and sporadic reviewer, so, as the author, do with them what you wish. I shall await your chapters and stories as I always have been and enjoy ever minute of it. Good day to you!
hinataisblue42 chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
That was cute! _

Naruto's such a pervert! But I guess he can't help it. lol
wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Oh Naruto almost had that kiss