Reviews for The Fire of the Sun |
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TheLuckyRedneck chapter 24 . 1/3 I kinda wanna hate you. I know people had to die but I didn’t want my heart to die, too. |
TheFoxy88 chapter 24 . 1/1 Present in 2024/2025 :D (happy new year!) English is not my main language so even though there's so much stuff that goes through my head when I think of this fic, it's difficult to articulate and use a variety of terms except "I love" and "perfect" but bear with me... The main points are: * I couldn't believe what I read in the Sanity updates (I enjoyed them immensely while worrying for your mental and physical health). Thank you for your dedication and perceverance through what seemed to be torture, you actually finished The Movement of the Earth and an unplaned sequel! I hope your husband didn't divorce you and your finger no longer hurts. The pain you had to go through was worth it, you're amazing! * I was engrossed in this fic the entire time, binged everything in two days. I loved Sam's POV at my utter surprise, it was so good. I thought about how the writing medium (as opposed to cinema) was so perfectly used to convey the chaos and the different layers of the Pack's Mind. I wouldn't have thought to use it in this way, it was a blast reading it. * Even though written in Meyer's voice, I really loved it. It was weird at first and then you get used to it. Also I guess the more the fic got away of the original material, the better it was. I kind of don't know what I'm talking about because I didn't read the books, and this almost convinced me to read them because it didn't appear that awful. You proved your point, and I think it's very badass of you. * Oftentimes, the secondary characters don't actually have a distinct and in depth personality or even relevance. But this is not most fanfics. Not only did I love the Pack (especially Sam and Emily), but also Charlie, Jessica and Angela. I love literally every character. Not necessarily as people (the Cullens are noisy af) but as characters, they did their part perfectly. Edward, Jasper and Alice were surprisingly disturbing, and I enjoyed that so much. * Liked seeing Jacod and Bella struggle through the imprinting and hating it because it's not them. Glad they got around it in the end. Imprinting is really the worst even though it seems romantic at first Fics of this quality are so rare, it's too bad the PDFs are not accessible anymore, but I saved both fics nonetheless using other means. Thank you for the good food, bless you 3 |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/25/2024 Present |
Yellow Melody chapter 24 . 12/22/2024 I genuinely ugly sobbed (in all the good ways). I geuniely loved the creativity and the heart you put into this project (mental/physical/emotional sacrifices). This project to you was something I NEEDED right now. Thank you for making the little teenage girl in me laugh, binge, love and cry with a book i havent done that with in a long time. |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/13/2024 Present |
Kt chapter 7 . 10/21/2024 Present! In 2024! |
Takerslady chapter 24 . 9/2/2024 **cries** |
Takerslady chapter 21 . 9/1/2024 Oh no not Quil |
Takerslady chapter 16 . 9/1/2024 Leah is so annoying, geez shut up |
Takerslady chapter 15 . 9/1/2024 I love Old Quil and Allison Uley hahahahaha so hilarious |
Takerslady chapter 5 . 9/1/2024 Bella get your shit together, forget those Cullens that abandoned you |
Kemq chapter 24 . 8/31/2024 great story |
lume chapter 24 . 8/15/2024 This... wow. You took me for a ride here. The writing of both of you is amazing, and it is an incredible work to see come through, and I cannot thank you enough for writing and sharing it with the world. I'm devastated over the death's, as it's been a while since I read something angst, but it is a great work nonetheles. |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2024 Omg ur book is amazing I can't stop reading like u r so talented u need to publish a book of ur own istg ur amazing |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/14/2024 Absolutely disgusting that you kept in the part of a toddler being imprinted on. There should’ve been a trigger warning for mentions of childhood sexual assault. Thanks for causing a ptsd episode |