Reviews for The Fire of the Sun
Guest chapter 7 . 4/12
Present. Loving this new take on things. Sooooo much better than Meyer's original story. Thanks for all you hard work.
Guest chapter 24 . 3/30
Wonder why you let Sam die (Grgh) and left everything shit.
eclipse love chapter 25 . 2/23
k, so I know how u don't like Stephanie Meyers or twilight, but u did an awesome job recreating a better version of new moon in her writing style. I just can't believe how much I liked a fan fiction about Bella and Jacob when the author hated the of so much
teacupdestiny chapter 24 . 2/16
This screws me up every single freaking time I read it. I hate this story so much but you are just literally the best writer (not just for this fic but all the others) I have ever seen. Even though you break my heart. I'm going to go read something happier (probably one of your other fics). Don't stop being awesome :)
Lupinica friggasdoiter chapter 7 . 1/11
Ooh have one of em imprint on Jessica, better yet have Leah imprint on her.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/4
I live in maui! Thanks!
Serenity Blossom chapter 24 . 12/18/2014
Man, you guys are good at what you do. I've enjoyed reading both stories and love your characterizations. Great read.
Vena Grey chapter 24 . 12/17/2014
Again, well done. Someday, I'll go back and read The Movement of the Earth and this after having read Twilight and New Moon (through page 242) right before. x
UntiedHeartbeat chapter 7 . 12/10/2014
Do you write your own stories? Because I think I have fallen in love with your writing. I'm not sure how much Meyer is hidden in this, but I've always loved New Moon. And I know Meyer did good with that book. Not brilliant, but good. Because it was the first time I've ever read a book that far. But this is brilliant. You pulled Angela and Jessica in this and gave Bella friends. That is what always angered me about Meyer. She made Ben, Mike, Angel and Jessica seem like figures instead of human characters. It's like anything apart from Edward was stupid. Man! Even though Edward was the stupid one, leaving Bella in New moon. *shakes head at stupidness*

Ps: I love you.
UntiedHeartbeat chapter 4 . 12/10/2014
I think Emily is beautiful.
Heather139 chapter 7 . 12/9/2014
Love it!
shadowgrl94 chapter 25 . 10/23/2014
I love this sequel and the other story. This is the third time I've read them which surprises me since I abhor the Twilight books (fucking Meyer). Great job!
Margaret chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
This is the second time I've read this new moon spinoff. Thank you for being one of the few fanfiction writers who can actually write well! This story is really hard to pull myself away from.
RILEY chapter 5 . 8/26/2014
phia chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
I agree with your hate for meyer her lack of detail is painful for the heart I love ur story plot I do wish u wouldn't put Meyers voice in it because I do prefer yours and ps I know this is off the subject completely but how could you like gale more than my beautiful peeta no disrespect to ur opinion im just a serious fan girl lol
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