Reviews for The Fire of the Sun
Bb34 chapter 6 . 4/14/2023
I hate how condescending he is.
Bb34 chapter 1 . 4/14/2023
3
Elizabeth chapter 25 . 2/23/2023
Fuck. This is horrifying and amazing. I read both of these in less than 24 hours. I really appreciate your analysis of the imprinting relationship. That's all. Thanks a lot.
tsubakiryuu chapter 18 . 2/21/2023
bella is a much better person than me, because if alice did that to i totally would tell her how much i hate her and her family and wish for them to just go away
Guest chapter 25 . 2/21/2023
Good as can be. Tears for after the battle. The cullens were so crazy in this story that was interesting. As always I’ll wish for more and more of Jacob and Bella. Thank you for the story.
eliz.senaca.999 chapter 2 . 2/19/2023
I don’t know if this one of the first is better. There both amazing though!
Ellie.Cast4 chapter 24 . 1/25/2023
I was not anticipating this ending at ALL. I cried the last three chapters consistently, CONSISTENTLY.
Wonderful reads! Insightful, believable characters (and their darker depths), just overall good stuff.
Ellie.Cast4 chapter 19 . 1/25/2023
Woah. This is dark.
I mean we all knows Jasper was a bad ass back in the day but this is straight scary.
I love what you did here.
Acall21 chapter 25 . 12/28/2022
Just wanted to say I loved Movement of the Earth and this continuation so much. It honestly felt canon to me. Loved the relationship between Bella and Jacob and how it evolved. Also love how the Cullen’s and Vampires were painted in this story and I think most of all I loved how Bella really found herself through all of this. Truly amazing work! Might be my favorite Bella and Jacob story I’ve read!
thereadingguru chapter 7 . 12/9/2022
Present
FuelMyDelusions chapter 24 . 12/8/2022
I can’t even put into words how much this fic means to me. That’s all I can say. THANKYOU.
itsLissa chapter 11 . 11/29/2022
The baby's imprint is one of most disgusting lore of Twilight. Point.
itsLissa chapter 8 . 11/29/2022
I see what you did with the movie analysis, miss...
itsLissa chapter 6 . 11/29/2022
Creeeeepy...
itsLissa chapter 5 . 11/29/2022
For the sake of being fair... I think the Cullens could and would be this manipulative in the canon (because they're).
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