Reviews for The Fire of the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm skiping whatever parts the Cullens show up because i hate what you did with them in this fics but i really like you take in the imprinting debacle and the relationship between Bella and Jacob. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid ass edward did all of that ON PURPOSE AHHHH. Like he obviously knew Charlie would hear. What a little shithead! Also how could Jake hide it from the pack? Once he phases they’ll read his mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GODDDDD I am suffering and FUMING during this chapter I hate Edward AAHHHHHH |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As good as this is, I was a bit disappointed with its direction. I had such high hopes after reading the first one. But that's just because I know what I like. Good story though and it was written lovely. Just missing lemons |
![]() ![]() ![]() This entire duology (that what I’m calling it) was amazing. This is canon as far as I’m concerned idc |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was my 13th reason |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m going feral |
![]() ![]() I can’t stop reading your stories. I am literally having trouble putting down my phone long enough to take care of my family like I’m supposed to. I don’t want to sleep tonight bc all I want to do is read. I love how you made Edward an even bigger butt than Meyer, I honestly never really liked him and now it’s like I don’t like him even more. Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() Well, I'm here, a few years later but will be to the end. |
![]() ![]() I love your sarcastic wit, I love reading your updates almost as much as I love your story. Your story makes alot more sense to me than what SM wrote like the affects their presence have on normal humans, that's what they use to make anyone ignore the signs of danger and need to run for their lives, instead they become become mesmerized. Your explanation of the way their voice affects the wolves through the phone line also makes sense. The so called love between Bella and leech always seemed fake and forced SM tried too hard there, but I always suspected that Bella is SM, the books are about her fantasies and if the way Bella acted after the, sparkle douche leech, left was natural to her SM needs medical help , the mental health kind. You're also right about her characters, they were OOC, especially Bella and especially after the leeches came back. This girl who fainted at the sight of blood and hated the cold, decided to die and live off blood and live in the cold forever is whacked. I really wish the books could be written over the right way and in a way that makes sense If I could I would buy the rights to them and hire someone like you or Nikki to do it the right way. Vampires that sparkle in the sun, they sound like fairies and I don't know how she thinks kissing cuddling a cold piece of marble is romantic. You'll have add layers of clothing for those romantic evenings. |
![]() ![]() So darn amazing. It's been a while since you wrote this but thank you so much for writing it. The last conversation between Renée and bella: Epic. That's talent right there. Hope you and your loved ones are doing fine. Thanks again. |
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![]() ![]() god damn. okay i definitely cried my eyes out. this fic is so good. so oo so good |
![]() ![]() i am genuinely mind blown holy freaking shit! THE! tHE REVELATIONs! THE PLOT TWISTS! ~OH HOW THE TURNS HAVE TABLED~ this is awesome. |