|Reviews for Roses in the Wind|
| Englasia Shine chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I'm surprised no one has ever reviewed this, I haven't read elsewhere in a while but this chapter helped me remember a lot of the story, it is a really brilliant chapter, engaging and intriguing. I love her realisation of the boat, the only criticism I have is their is not much of a reaction to her scars would love to see some more detail into her feelings and maybe a bit of freaking out however I love where this story is going and would love to see you carry it on.
Maybe she meets Liz briefly, would love to see the more suspicious side of elsewhere especially as it seems your referring to a murder situation. Please keep writing your imagery is fantastic and can definately relate to the emotions.
Englasia Shine :)