Reviews for If You're Lucky
TonyandZivaUK chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
nom nom Tony in a Towel... nuf said! haha

Really great story again! Really dont know why I never read these before!
Christina chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Awesome 's my favorite:)It's like watching deleted scenes.

You've done a excellent job picturing the characters!

Thank you once 're very talented!
IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Unbeknownst to Tony, Ziva is well tuned to the subtleties of her apartment, she hears him turn off the water, open and close the shower door, grab a towel from the closet and step into the hallway.

...Tony in a towel...nice...:):P

Everything smells delicious. He walks up behind her and lightly puts both hands on her hips and presses a kiss to her neck.

"Trying to sneak up on me, yes?"

"Did I succeed?"


...So cute.:)

"Your phone rang twice, it was McGee."

"Did he call you?"


"Well we probably don't have a case then."

"I hope not."

Tony reluctantly leaves Ziva to the fajitas and crosses the distance to the dining room table. Flipping open his phone he finds 2 text messages from McGee.

Tony, answer your phone, I need you to do something.

I need you to sign a case file we forgot about this afternoon.

"Doesn't he know I don't answer personal calls after 7:00PM?"

...AH! The REAL reason why he doesn't answer his phone after 7 pm!:P:P

"Okay, let's…Tony you are still in your towel."

...Tell me that's not a complaint.:P

"Fair enough, let's eat"

...Atta girl.:P:)

Ziva let out a quiet moan, he had hit the spot, his hot breath tickling her neck, it took all of her will power not to drop her plate, tug at his towel, and pull him down the hallway into her room.

...Why go all the way to the bedroom? You have a perfectly good table and kitchen floor right there!:P:)

Ziva took the liberty of preparing a plate for Tony while he hmmm'd and haaah'd over her wine rack set neatly in the corner of the room. Finally selecting a bottle, he used the convenient bottle opener suctioned to Ziva's counter and poured two glasses of wine.

...I love that he's doing all this while wearing a towel.:P:)

...And I love how you "inserted" all the scenes from the actual cool.:)
Zivacentric chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I especially loved the first section of this at her apartment ... the towel, the cooking , the "pinchy" comment (I can HEAR her voice saying that from the show!), and their easy way w/ each other. Nicely done, my friend. )
The Fiction Princess chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
awww loved it, havnt seen the episode yet as I live in UK but it was so sweet and lush. Sad that its complete because it would have been a lovely fic to continue.

However i look forward to future fics by you.

Much loved xxx
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Very cute. Nice job!
nciswoooo chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Absolute love for this! Fantastic:)
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Good story, you did make it seem like ziva and tony are not really tim friends, but knowing how good tim is at keeping sercets he could have one hell of a social life
hundan chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
That was really cute and to be honest I so wished that actually happened in the show, you even made it so believable! Great little story!

Sophie Ranier chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Ah! Meg I love it:) so adorable and you have so much talent:)
VerySpecialAgentTiva chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
So so cute and very interesting on how you worked the scenes into each other. Good job.
NCIS Connection chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Can't wait for updates!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Oh my gosh loved this!
loofoca chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
this is sweet! i liked it
13NCISgirl chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Love It! If only it would happen in the show!