Reviews for Belonging
sanguineriver chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
That was a fun short read.
I always imagined Padme to be a virgin... You wrote it well. And alike some others on here, the Force would have been a fun added twist, and also more detail.
You could write a sequel and add those hm? :)
lordoftherings chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
You are the biggest nerd on the planet!
Edward Anthony Ferris chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I, too, am an Author here. I don't often read the romance/sex stories on here, but I'm doing my own one-shot and wanted pointers. I think this is believable, the dialogue is great, and the setting is perfect. Only, I would have expanded more. Made it longer, more detailed. Not the whole sex scene, just the general setting. Good job, I'll be reading more of your work.
Anakin's lover chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Good, but you missed a thing that I think would be vital in jedi sex, THE FORCE!
Chase chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
LOVED IT! Was amazing. Do you write professionally because you should!
anyone chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
good good but it was a cliff-hanger you need to write a sequel so u can be thought of as a good write but i found out that she is not a vargen
nat13cat chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
i love it nice job!
twilightmecrazii chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
loved it amazing