Reviews for Vision
Wow chapter 1 . 3/31
But it never did get better because you never finished it, MORE PLEASE, good job!
OnceAndFutureKingdom-MAXWOLF chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update! This is really good, well-written and very intriguing! I wanna know how it all works out, and how Torak's gonna avoid all the hurt and conflict that will obviously happen! So yeah, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
solowolf chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
i lov it! r u gonna make another chapter? :D
UnseenStar chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I like it! :) I would suggest to be more careful with gramatical errors though. But other than that, it's nice.
The Queen of Valencia Torgue chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
This is interesting, please continue.
Alalala chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Thats really great, I hope you keep on going! :)
ScarlettAlexandra chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
weird... but good start :)