|Reviews for Vision|
| nirvana9010 chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
please finish this,it's so good
| Flame-Leopard chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Yeh PLS CONTINUE OR I WILL DIE CUZ THIS IS AWESOME!
| renn chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
PLEASE chapter 2 :)
| Wow chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
But it never did get better because you never finished it, MORE PLEASE, good job!
| Marshmallow Boy chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update! This is really good, well-written and very intriguing! I wanna know how it all works out, and how Torak's gonna avoid all the hurt and conflict that will obviously happen! So yeah, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| solowolf chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
i lov it! r u gonna make another chapter? :D
| UnseenStar chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I like it! :) I would suggest to be more careful with gramatical errors though. But other than that, it's nice.
| The Queen of Valencia Torgue chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
This is interesting, please continue.
| Alalala chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Thats really great, I hope you keep on going! :)
| ScarlettAlexandra chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
weird... but good start :)