Reviews for A Whole New World
Teagsiebabe85 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
AWWWWWWWWWWW 3 This was just beautiful :)
Mssr.Courtney chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
could you please naybe possibley make this a twoo shot I just wanna see whats happenes between the two hehehe

Loved it I wish my brother was like that with me!

xxAbbyxx
Malachite chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Falling asleep together is so incredibly cute and sweet...great ending.
Manny101 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
There are a couple things in this story that struck me personally. Firstly, I have NEVER played Candyland. I can totally understand how Logan feels. Secondly, Aladdin is probably my favorite animanted Disney film. I remember when it came out I was working at the Disney store and the management staff gave me a deluxe Aladdin set for my birthday. (I'd been fondling and caressing it ever since it arrived in the warehouse! Haha!) I bought a rhinestone Genie pin and an Aladdin watch for myself. Discount, you know! :D

The story itself was so sweet! I love how much the siblings care for each other. It goes against the cliche of the bratty, spoiled sibling trying to ruin the older one's life. I like how you carried their dynamic from the show into your story.

The Kogan relationship seems to be at its fledgling state. I found it so sweet and just "awwwww"! Well done, as always!
Moderately Difficult chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Stop writing things so damn cute. It's killing me. ._. The fluffiness is overwhelming!

No, but srs, don't ever stop. Ever.
OptimisticallyHeartbroken chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
aaaaaawwwwwwwww! That was toooo cute! I wish i had a little sister to sing to. Haha im mushy like that. I love how logan thought it was cool too! Great write!
Music4ever1617 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Cuteyyyy. I love Aladdin one of my all time favorite Disney Movies besides Lion King. :)
Sunggi chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
So sweet i cant wait for the other ones ( as i readed "pre-series"xD
ThingsLeftBehind chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
That was a really sweet story and I absolutely love the way you write. It's sophisticated and descriptive, but at the same time it's not overbearing. I thought of the term "Simplistically Vivid" as I was reading for some reason.

I also liked the way you captured how the characters act. It made me feel like it was actually them. For example, "He rubbed his hands together, prepared for a challenging task of trying to beat his little sister." Not only doesn't it state a fact that everyone who's watched the show knows, but it displays an action that one of the characters would do.

I did enjoy the story very much but there was one thing I didn't like. It's a pet peeve of mine but it's pretty minor. "Every once in a while they would both look up, curiously at the same time, and smile at one another. AND eventually, they found theselves leaning closely..." Now, my problem is how you start the second sentence. The word 'and' is a conjunction and by definition is used to connect two similar ideas in a sentence. However, by starting a sentence with that word, you are "breaking the rules" in a sense. Another reason it is not to be used there is because you already use the transition word "eventually" and thus you do not need to use the word "and".

Very Good and I can't wait to read more of your writing :)
souvenirsfaits chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
This was really cute,great job:D
Gabsikle chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
So. Much. Adorableness.
xChemicalxFallxPanicx chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
This was so cute! I loved the image of Kendall singing with Katie it was adorable! 333 :3 And the drive by reviewing has ceased and I'll get back to work :3
This Account Be Inactive chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
this was really well written and so cute, the whole aladin thing was just adorable, i loved it! :)
Ercassiel-x chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Hey! I'm x_noelian_x on Livejournal!

And I really did love this story :')

I adore how you wrote Aladdin into it, and it was just super cute!

It sucks that you didn't get your package D: what's your LJ username, because I don't think that all the one's I've sent were posted...one of them could be yours? Maybe?

If not, gimme a prompt, and I could write you a fic as a thank you, if you'd like (:

anyway, thanks again xD

xxx
InsanityIsBetter chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
This was extremely good. I loved it! :)
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