It makes me sad for bella that she thinks so lowly of herself that she actually threw herself at disgusting manwhoreward...

Uhhhh he slept with married women? He's officially done for in my eyes. That's irredeemable:(

Reading this is like watching a movie. Everything come alive in my brain. So real n exciting.

I really enjoy reading the 1st n 2nd chapter. I like the idea of the story :) ok. I better continue reading

Aww, a lovely end to a lovely story. Thanks for sharing.

I'm really enjoying your story. Your characters feel very real, and Edwards 'voice' is a refreshing change. You create a great visual for the reader, and your lemons are spot on. (Saucy without being crude. The combination really works!)

My only (hopefully constructive)criticism is that Bella started out strong, but has become a bit of a weeper in the last couple of chapters. Cutting back a bit on her tearful eyes would make this story spot on.

Awww he likes her.

I giggled so hard on this chapter!

Really great story! Love how much Edward's grown! :)

Loved the story overall, will there be an epilogue or is this it?

Carlisle broke my heart! I feel bad for Esme, but she's so deep into her addiction, I think Carlisle should let her go. Divorce her legally, and find some happiness. He can still take care of her bills at the clinic and have the boys visit her, but he deserves some happiness. I feel so bad for him! I'm glad Edward is moving closer to home, it broke my heart how happy C was to hear that. The sled scene was adorable too :)

Awww, loved the brother bonding this chapter :) Even if Emmett's intentions were to keep his brother close, he still didn't need to have girls send him boobie pics to his phone, he could've just given Tanya Edward's number. So, in that case, I'm kinda on Rose's side, but other than that, I'm glad they worked things out!

Great chapter, I loved it. Bella and Edward make a great team :)

This was a great chapter; thank you, thank you, thank you for not making Bella cliche and getting all mad about something that wasn't that big of a deal. Thank you for making her mature and understanding, as most girls should be. She was right to tell Edward that Tanya and girls like her are in his past, and it was "BEFORE" them, so it doesn't matter anymore. Go Bella! I'm glad Edward even exorcised some of his ghosts too.
The end of the chapter was my favorte, when they were joking about getting helmets and pads, lol, too funny!

This was a great story. I would like to read out takes of the future.

such a sweet wonderful story.
india

Like it so far, looking forward.
India