|Reviews for The Oklahoma Times|
| Jasper's Mom chapter 1 . 4/15
I seriously doubt there was a "911" back in 1967. You would have dialed 0 for operator or called the hospital. Nice try though. I think insanity must be the reason people name their kids "Apple" or "North" these days.
| Flag chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Not bad... But it's 1967, not 1951.
Good format, interesting... But your summary could use some work.
| random chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
this is depressing... but good job it has the newspaper format. i had to do a newspaper on the Outsiders too and the hardest part was making it realistic. oh and also the father's name is also "darrel". darry's full name is Darrel Shaynne Curtis Jr.