Reviews for Rock Foundation
Bella Paige chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
Oh you two are just too cute ... glad she didn’t freak about the paper

I’m guessing Lanie hasn’t seen the paper

O Hi Josh (Biggest grin on my face)
NoOrdinaryLines chapter 4 . 2/5/2011

The way you ended this chapter was priceless. Loved every minute of it. Thanks for the speedy update. Looking forward to the next one already.


PS: Your DM is disabled. IDK if you knew that, just wanted to let you know.
I'm Widget chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
Oops! lol I hope this gets rid of Josh once and for all. I'm ready for him to take a hike!
Warden18 chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
I really liked that chapter! I can't wait for you to continue.
BCWh chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
I love this so far!

-Keep it updated && soon!

CastleFreak1212 chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
OMG! This story is getting so good! I'm hooked:) can't wait for more!:)
whimorawhy chapter 4 . 2/5/2011

Okay. I need more. This is amazing. :)
Warden18 chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
hey, great new chapter, i really like it, that was great, cant wait for the next chapter
Nathan fan chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
OMG! This is the most wonderful chapter ever! I LOVE it when they have such real and honest conversation and you wrote all of it so smoothly and so realistically. AWESOME! I melted inside when Kate teased, "Mr. Mom," and Castle answered, "And proud of it." That whole conversation in the park was so natural. You didn't force anything and just let it flow easily between them. I am so IMPRESSED that you were able to have them discuss Josh and Gina without having any of it seem forced or out of character. I also love the way you dealt with the issue of Kate paying her own way at the zoo. And I love that they ended up at The Old Haunt and Castle said, "A bar is a place for friends and family. The 12th counts as both." A bit of a melt there too! Their parting at Kate's door was perfect for now. I could read about days like this for a long time! It was ever so satisfying! Could we hook you up to write for the show, because I would think that I'd died and gone to heaven to see this day on the screen!
Bella Paige chapter 3 . 2/5/2011

Chapter two

Yep that got her Kate ... good one

Gotta love Paparazzo’s

Chapter three

Or rick could watch the kids until they’re old enough for school ... and Kate you need a family to go home to after the crap you deal with at home.

Kate let the man pay for the ticket, he’s just trying to do something nice for you

YAY the old haunt gets a mention, I hope they bring it up more on the show

Em loving this story ... please continue and make it a loooong story. As I was reading the end of this chapter ‘Accidently in love’ by Counting Crows
jjf chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
I liked the gentle flow to their day, and the discussion about children, basically saying she needs a guy like him, his amazing words about wanting her to be happy, very believable and great. write more please
kate-hi chapter 3 . 2/4/2011
LOVE it. You have a great sense of the characters, and I love how you're developing the story so far.

I'm obsessed.

Keep writing!

whimorawhy chapter 3 . 2/4/2011
Yay, I'm so glad you wrote a sequel (of sorts)

Amazing two chapters, I love Castle and Beckett talking openly, you don't read a lot of that, and it's nice. I can't wait for more!
lunotto chapter 3 . 2/4/2011
kate needs to brake off with josh when he's coming back on sunday :) what are they going to do on saturday night? can't wait:)
Tycho77 chapter 3 . 2/4/2011
And they slowly get together...
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