Reviews for The Romance of Gwaine
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Hi, just finished your story - I think you have a lot of potential as a writer. It's good overall and kind of sweet I guess. But, one bit of advice I would give, is that if you are writing a fanfic, based almost entirely on a pre-existing legend, as the central arc of this fanfiction clearly is, I think you need to credit that legend somewhere before your work, be it as a pre-note kind of thing or in your summary. No one on here is going to criticise you for rewriting or taking a lot of inspiration from an old legend, but if you don't credit it, it appears that you are taking credit for the plot yourself, which isn't fair. :) Apart from that, I liked your story, and I think the idea of a series is really interesting. Your work made me smile.
ZeGabz chapter 7 . 3/12/2011
Yay for happy endings!
Superdani4Ever chapter 7 . 3/5/2011
i liked it!very beautiful indeed
edwardfiend chapter 7 . 3/2/2011
loved it.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
cute ending
berry-cool chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
That was adorable! Great ending! Leon next plz :) xxx
Guest chapter 5 . 2/20/2011
soo I'm confused
Account Vacated chapter 4 . 2/10/2011
ah, okay, just throwing my two-cents in here. Well, besides the OOC-ness of Lancelot (I'm mystified about that, cause there could be so many reasons he's kind of cynical these days; write a story!) and the how quick the romance was, this is one of my pet stories these days. Okay, onto con-crit; well, maybe you could flesh it out more; the grammar's good, and the story is really good, but it kind of goes too quickly. Anyhow, can't wait for what happens next.
Dreamcloud123 chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
This is great! Please update! And please write about Percival! *puppy dog eyes*

Dreamcloud123 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
This is wonderful! Though I am a bit disappointed on how you portrayed Lancelot. Please write about Percival next! There are no fanfics for him and he's hot!

Account Vacated chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Yay! Third Chapter...oh and I finally just realized that this is based on Lady Ragnelle from the legend of Sir Gawain and Dame Ragnelle (I wikipedia'd it) *feels kind of slow*

Anyways love it.
ruby890 chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
and the plot thickens. way to go.
ruby890 chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
nicely done.
ruby890 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
yay that was great. you got him down packed. reading on

oh and could you go to these sites and vote plz and thanks.


Reader chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I would like to review to give you a piece of advice: do not hold your fanfic hostage. This means to say: "I'll only update if I get so many reviews". It may scare some readers into reviewing, but I guarantee you that many people (usually I am one of them) will refuse to review even if they were planning too because they hate writers who do this. You don't have to listen to me, but I have spoke with a lot of writers on here before about this issue and I know it's true.

I do not want to just leave you a complaint review. So far I have read the first chapter and like it. Ragnelle is an ...unusual name but I like how she's maybe not the prettiest girl ever, it's different for once. You wrote well too, the only thing that put me off about the story was your final authors note.

I hope you take my advice on board, but if you don't, that's fine, Im only trying to help you get as Many reviews as possible.

Now I'm off to read the other chapter
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