Reviews for Rise of the Lycans
Taiki chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
I love this story so far. I hope you will have more out soon. Later
HarMonyneverends chapter 2 . 2/13/2011
Omg...update again! This is awesome! I had to watch van helsing again to get the look, but I agree that it's better than underworld (but I do love underworld). How is ron gonna take all this? How much are they going to tell him? Can there be lots of ron bashing, please? And ginny bashing!

What if they bit remus? Would he then be a lycan too, or is the fact that is already is a werewolf negate that? And what about sirius? SO MANY QUESTIONS! Please don't keep me in suspense for long!a
KennethWhiterider chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
hi I love the story to start with and i would like you permission to start a fic similar to serpent court calling it the Phoenixes wrath if you say yes and would like to know more please private message me WHITERIDER
afallenheart chapter 2 . 2/11/2011
Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!
dustpan9876 chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
dude I like hope u continue with it
DonPJuan chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
keep up the good work...
Penny is wise chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
Awesome story so far can't wait for next chapter.
hogwart lady chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
awesome job and i liked how u chose the look of the lycans from van helsing they were strong and other things and hope u can continue it
DZ2 chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
A nice story, excellent descriptions of the changes and forms; if you like werewolf stuff, then may I also recommend 'Steve Feasey's Changeling Series' about a young werewolf.

Anyway, I hope you update soon and, after hearing your reply, I am currently working on Ch 1 of my answer to your Vamp Harry Challenge; I hope you like it.
FatherTime chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
A very interesting start with a lot of potential given the base you set with them being more than werewolves, but lycans. Just curious about a few things. Since they have now transformed and become lycans and wolves have a pack mentality will they form a pack? What happens when they run into werewolves or other predetors, can they sense them? Will they have "territory"? Now that they've changed will they have more animal like instincts, I.e. more proone to violence or showing their dominance? I feel like there should be more struggle to them coping with the change at first. We don't really see it with lupin, but he's also been a were for a very long time, and I feel like he may have have struggled with his wolf form trying to take over his respones in human form. Regardless, you're story seems like it'll be enjoyable! Update soon!
Fat ppl are harder to kidnap chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
good story hope u update soon
King of the Fallen chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
Excellent fic, please update soon, ja ne.
Atharos chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
these two chapters are awesome i loved them i dont even have any criticisms, i just want to read more of this

BlackRoseFire chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
Awesome story. I really can't wait to see the next chapter. I agree with about Van Hellsings werewolves. I prefer werewolve like Weregarurumon myself but thats just me.
jabarber69 chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
hey you didnt disappoint me, it is your story, I just gave you my opinion...

as for the beastiality sex scene, WoW! great sex scene hell great everything love this whole ideal...

although it might have been better if you had planned on them having the ability to keep their clothes during the change like a animagus, you know sirius and mcgongall can change into their animal then change back wearing their clothes still! but then again it might not fit this story...

oh and by the way did I say wOw! great story!
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