|Reviews for Monster|
| Rosie-Poo chapter 19 . 6/23/2012
I loved it. I said my peace on what I was not a fan of.. and I am still not a fan of Rose being the whole.. Bella type chick but oh well!
| Rosie-Poo chapter 11 . 6/23/2012
The think that I don't like is that Rose caved so easily. She pulled a 'Bella' in Twilight move. Rose is bitter and hateful now. No way in hell would she have backed down to Royce. I don't like it. Just sayin. - EliteOlympian
| Rosie-Poo chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I love the first chapter this far. Very good with details.
| fictionfreak11 chapter 19 . 10/20/2011
Wow! That was the best fan fiction I've read on this site! I can totally picture it as a best selling book !love the way you write
| Ellie1600 chapter 19 . 7/24/2011
Omg! Amazing! Just read the whole story, start to finish, in less than 48 hours!
| bookworm8721 chapter 19 . 7/23/2011
nicely written. I enjoyed reading it.
| ingrid44 chapter 19 . 7/19/2011
Just had to read the last chapters in one go.
Good story with lots of drama and suspense. Glad you didn't rush Rose's recovery. Royce brought back the awfulness of the original rape and then terrorized her again - any woman would take months to recover. No way would any woman be capable of jumping into bed with another man, even her husband and have sex with him. Very realistic ending you've done-paying homage to a real woman's reactions to rape.
Enjoyed the story and will look forward to your next.
| ingrid44 chapter 16 . 7/19/2011
Go Emmett! Yes, yes and yes. At last Royce has gotten his just reward.
How did the others reach Rose and Emmett so quickly? They took another flight from Seattle? Just so you know, in today's economy Seattle would probably only have 2 or 3 daily non-stop flights to New York. (I once worked for an airlines you see. Always hated when writers/TV and Hollywood disses the public believing we don't know about time differences.)
| ingrid44 chapter 15 . 7/19/2011
First - my apologies for having stopped reading the story. Family matters then I was away (without my PC).
And now I just cheated by reading two chapters before commenting.
But I was anxious to catch up and finally, Rose is showing some gumption! Running is good, and she even managed to land a couple of hits on Royce - good for her!
Glad Emmett is back on the scene and Alice is now home to 'see' what's happening. Only problem of course is that they are in Forks on the West coast, while Rose is in New York -at least 6 hours flying time from Seattle! And Emmett still has to drive to the local airport and take a commuter service to just get to Seattle!
Love the suspense, and further more, I'm lucky - I get to go straight to the next chapter.
| DrawnToTheNight chapter 19 . 7/8/2011
this story was amazing.
emmett is the most amazing charater in the twilight saga in my opinion and you did him amazing justise.
this story it's self was very nicely writen and i really enjoyed reading.
thank you for writing.
| ForeverM chapter 19 . 7/8/2011
Gongratulations on finishing this amazing story. Thank you for sharing this, it has been my honor to beta this monster for you ;)
| HollyShannenForever chapter 19 . 6/18/2011
yay i loved this!
| sparkley-angel chapter 19 . 6/17/2011
i like it :)
| edwardbabymomma chapter 19 . 6/17/2011
Awesome ending! Thanx for sharing!
| edwardbabymomma chapter 18 . 6/17/2011