|Reviews for Revival of a Clan|
| AJGuardian chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
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| Ero-kitsune chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Good story. U could probably make more than one chapter easily
| Igor De Souza Santos chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
| soarath chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Longest one shot ever lol loved it
| Snuggly Bear Zacky-Kinz XD chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Story was dark in parts but very enjoyable
| Dregus chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
though shizune was kinda a bitch, and naruto's friends were being stupid (i mean its not like their clans dont do the same thing) i rather enjoyed it. though with stories like these i always hoped there would be another chapter (even if it short, just to show how their lives have been some odd years later with their children)
| whitecloud222 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
good one shot
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
ребят я по поводу вступление лук 150 ник князь почти фул горн
| Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
What happened to chapter 2?
| redvixen0 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
What about sakura lee and ino? You never finished that part. And its called CHAKRA! NOT KI! stop watching dbz.
| Ryperiour2 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Nice Can you make a version with lemons PWEEEEZE?
| Wizco chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
The story completely lost me around the mind-rape drug and I stopped reading. I've read it once before, though.
It's quite entertaining, though you've definitely improved since then.
As with my previous review, I advise you to comb through this once again for spelling errors. 'Thoese' is one I remember, also 'maange'.
| animeromance72 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I LOVED THIS STORY! IT MADE ME LAUGH & CRY! IT MADE MY HEART RACE! ALSO SHOWS THAT SAKURA IS A BITCH!
| hanipman chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Before I've realized it, I've read this fic many times since I the first. Naruto's own views on his way of life is so interesting, especially when it applies to the morality of incest. While it apparently takes place in the Naruto AU, everything is described so that is fits reality. The issue of incest between mother and son is so balantly immoral in my eyes, but this takes love to another level. It rekindles my faith in humanity when I see that true love is established but at the same time disgust at others inability to empathize. Props to Shikamaru being the logically sound friend. Seriously well written. This is how one shots should be written.