|Reviews for Kingdom Hearts 3: Domain of Doors|
| EvanTenkatsu5 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Good story i just love Kingdom Hearts 2 ive just read the 1rst chapter and I found it very interesting, haha, :) well im new at this so hope u update more bye and thanks.
| GingerSnapsBack chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Get them to meet a girl Riku might protect because he loves her XD
| NotaHero21 chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I wont lie about being a perturbed by the fact that kairi is being left out of the adventure, I dont like giving advice when I dont know what an author has planned but I would suggest not letting her be captured or held hostage. Either make her plot relevant or never show her again. Also try to work on dialog, Riku's seemed a little ooc to me, but that just my pessimistic view kicking in. With all original fanfiction like this that build off of unseen cannon though this has potential, I'll be sure to stick around to see where this all goes.