Reviews for Breaking Bella
Guest chapter 3 . 6/11
wow, although it's been years since you've updated this,
so far, i am very moved by this story.
this chapter was very powerful...
i had tears in my eyes the whole time i read it through.
what a fuckin bastard he is...no matter what, what he did
is completely inexcusable...she didnot deserve that.
it seems she really didn't do anything wrong and it was all on him.
how does he find redemption? how can he deserve her back after
all that he has done, esp all of the women he had sex with? that is just
the worse kind of betrayal esp all of the time bella tried to talk to him.
idk...i feel like he needs to suffer for a few years at least lose everything
before he can even approach her for a reconciliation.
during that time of distance, he should live like a
monk and think about all that he did and feel sorry for it every single day.
perhaps if she does divorce him and completely cut off any ties from him,
that may help wake him up but definitely need time to atone...
i don't want him to find any happiness at all.
i really want him to suffer...
i definitely wish you would continue this to its completion.
jk chapter 11 . 1/7
why have bella so hung up on her piece of shit cheating ex? its fucking pathetic...Edward didn't have any problem fucking girls WHILE he was married so why the fuck are you making bella have a problem getting laid AFTER she divorced his ass for ignoring her and cheating on her?
jk chapter 10 . 1/7
he makes his whoring sound so fucking intimate...which is WORSE!

and what was that weird shit with the whore he fucked? that soft goodbye Edward...again with the intimacy...like he fucking loved them while he had them...
remember how he kissed that one "girl" on the forehead before he left the hotel room?

and how in the actual fuck did bella not know that he was renting hotel rooms?
jk chapter 8 . 1/7
why do we still not know how many woman hes slept with since hes been married?/
jk chapter 6 . 1/7
theres no way in mother fucking hell that he can "fix" two fucking years of cheating! sleeping with young girls that look like bella? fucking disgusting
jk chapter 5 . 1/7
LOL bellas pov at the end of chapter 5?omg I'm so fucking embarrassed for her!

voice so pretty
want to see
miss so much...
smells like 30 other womens pussys...
smells like a std...
jk chapter 3 . 1/7
I'm glad bella had sex with james...I just wish she fucking loved it ya know...shes known that Edwards been cheating on her for fucking YEARS!11
jk chapter 1 . 1/7
well what the fuck did he expect? hes been fucking cheating on her! does bella know? how many times has he cheated on her?
Guest chapter 12 . 8/3/2016
Write another chapter and finish the story it's really good!
King BigClock chapter 12 . 4/10/2016
No, it doesn't make sense.

His family shunned him then tried to apologize like it was ok for them to do that. No that's not ok, no real family would do that. And now Bella is 'moved on'

And I 100% bet if you had not stopped writing, you wouldn't have had Edward move on, you'd have him wallow and be talked down too while writing full chapters with Bella and a another dude like you already have.
jk chapter 12 . 10/20/2015
how can you compare their cheating?
bella has just had a TWO YEAR suspicion confirmed by some whore in the diner! James took advantage of her she was in no state to make a decision right then but I still don't see it as cheating ...Edward had been cheating for years and bella already had the divorce papers...Edward cheated cause he was distant from his wife for a few months...boo hoo he wanted to be held maybe he could have opened his goddamn mouth and talked to bella instead of working all the time...even if she wouldn't listen its no fucking excuse!
jk chapter 8 . 10/20/2015
bitch please bella acts like its fair and even he cheated she cheated...um NO he cheated MANY TIMES FOR YEARS and bella had sex once at the very end of her marriage whilst shse already had the divorce papers! That my friend is a very big fucking difference!
and no I don't give one fuck why bella shut Edward out...it doesn't mother fucking matter!
hes nasty and used up he can die now I don't give one single fuck about him
jk chapter 5 . 10/20/2015
that whole
voice so pretty
wanna touch
back to darkness

that whole part was soooo motherfucking stupid!
shes known hes been cheating on her for years! she wouldn't want anything to do with that nasty piece of used up shit! hes probably been with 100 one night stands since they've been together! Why the fuck doesn't he have stds? and kids? huh?
fuck, make it fair! give him herpes and 4 kids its only right!
jk chapter 3 . 10/20/2015
Edward said he betrayed her and that he'd mke it up to her some way. How do you make up cheating? You just cant and he didn't do it once he did it sooooo many times. Hes out man theres just no coming back from this and as far as I'm concerned bella didn't cheat, the marriage was over the second Edwards hooked up with someone else, it was over years ago bella was free to do what she wanted!
Romantic Journalist chapter 6 . 10/10/2015
I'm sorry, but how hard is it to just walk into the dressing room and tell her that her flowers weren't delivered and that he loves her? Isn't the natural response to hold your lover when she's sad?
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