|Reviews for Starlight|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
needs more gwen vore
| Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Lovely story... and it makes the series make SO MUCH MORE SENSE..lol very well thought out and logical... Good job.
| darthdragon chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
You know I am not surprised that Kevin knew. Great work.
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
| Tetsu Deinonychus chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Now this is how a Bwen story should be!
Gwen thinking Ben was gay was hilarious, and everyone seemed very in-character.
What I really liked about this is that you captured the awkwardness that realistically one would feel (at least in our culture) upon realizing they've fallen for their cousin.
Too many of these Bwen fics just have them hook up right away without giving a thought to how weird that would be. And, much of what makes an incest pairing interesting is how they deal with the taboo, but no one else seems to get that. I just wish there were more Bwen fics like this.
BTW Kevin being an intentionally bad boyfriend to play cupid was a nice touch.
| doc boy chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
well it could have been better. it was kind of rushed and didn't have enough meat to it. and the dialog was kinda childish in a way and part of it was little bit awkward. no offence. so i suggest you try to add a little more meat to it and try to make it feel a little more naterul next time.