Reviews for Sunburn
dauntlessofthesea chapter 14 . 7/19
Wow, one of the sexiest yet somehow adorable PercyxApollo fanfictions I've read. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17
You should do a one shot of their first time
Caleb chapter 9 . 6/7
It is perfect not gay
Sikami chapter 1 . 5/29
THAT WAS HOT. LOVED THE SEX SCENE AND THE MENTIONS OF THEIR MEETINGS. GONNA ENJOY THE REST OF THE BOOK NOW XD
Huge Fan chapter 14 . 5/25
Please update! This fanfic is amazing!
Kameron Doughty chapter 14 . 5/5
Absolutely LOVE it! Amazing. Dare I say, better that Rick himself? Of course thee is the problem where I don't know who's telling the story. I mean at the beginning of a chapter, Percy's telling the story, then sprinkled throughout the story, Apollo stars telling the story, and then there are the parts where I don't know who's telling the story. Other than that, I fully encourage you to keep writing. Good Luck- Kameron
Guest chapter 14 . 5/2
oh noooooo
i just realized this is the last chapter
oh well it's ok
u probably have lots of other stuff to do
thx for the great story hope u continue this someday
Pamela chapter 13 . 5/2
im sorry about ur brother in law T_T
ur a really good writer
lisa chapter 9 . 5/2
awwwww
so cute
ur smut is great
Cassy chapter 1 . 5/2
3
loved it great job
MissJacksonMrPanic chapter 14 . 4/24
I...Wow. I love the emotions you put in this story. It's real. Not just, "oh, he's cute. Fuck me, the end." You put your own emotions into this story and it made it even more enjoyable to read. Relationships aren't all sunshine(Pun intended) and rainbows(another gay pun) and you captured that! Percy and Apollo are in a real relationship here and I'm want more. I like how it isn't just Percy/Apollo. You added how Annabeth and Rachel feel about it as well. And Poseidon. The pure emotions, trust, hope, lust, and reality in this story is almost too much! I would like to find out how Sally reacts, along with the gods, and how does Blackjack respond? We all know Percy, and his dumbass loyalty. I don't think he should choose to become a god. But, really, it's your choice. But is he doesn't, how does Apollo react? And deal with his death? I'm rambling, but this story has awesome potential. You're an amazing author and I'm so excited to see what happens. Good luck! PS:If you understand my name(MissJacksonMrPanic) I might love you. I'll give you a hint: She IS nasty. Love, Your adoring fan.
NotImportantP chapter 14 . 4/8
Dude, I love this story you should write more chapters m!
Brokenbyangels chapter 14 . 3/23
Are you gonna finish this? I can still talk with you... I think Sally or Paul should walk in with Percy completely tied up, blindfolded, gagged, and crying as Apollo fucked him. It would be so funny! Love ya
Brokenbyangels chapter 13 . 3/23
I'm so sorry about your brother! I lost one of my dads to cancer and the other to a war. I'm so sorry! I'm always here to talk! I can give you my email or whatever. But if you don't want to, listen to me now. Shutting yourself up doesn't help. You have to be around people. I almost committed suicide because I didn't have anyone. I found a boyfriend and had my best friends, but be careful. I know it's 2016, but I love your writing. I also know what you're going through. Please, if you need it, let me help. I'm a girl, in case that changes anything. I want you to be happy, so you can write more.
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 12 . 2/29
wow
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