Reviews for Watching Over Harry |
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![]() ![]() Yes. Andromeda was one of the few Blacks who were not evil. And as for Bellatrix, I NEVER REALLY DID consider her to be 100% evil, just misguided. This, being the 1st chapter of the story, looks really promising. I just hope the rest of the story is just as good! |
![]() ![]() For a moment I thought this was pacifist Bella. No offense but whenever I filter for Bella fics I want psychopatic romance guilty pleasure, otherwise I'd filter for other pairings. But hey, you did deliver justice at least |
![]() ![]() ![]() I humbly ask; are you going to come back tobwriting |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been a fun read, a few missteps here and there. And i noticed some people pointing out errors which is fair but even with those they weren’t that harmful to the story. Although i do think this harry would’ve wiped the floor with Voldemort. Still really enjoyed this and hope to see you continue writing someday |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting way to dispose of the big D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Took forever to get to the will reading, but i am mostly pleased with it. Your Dumbledore is a real bastard. Looking forward to seeing Molly get everything she deserves. |
![]() ![]() Its Harry James Potter not Hadrian! Read the Books! Stop butchering a famous persons name its bad luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't help but think Bella's trial been put off until it's revealed that Harry is still alive. Also don't really see a reason for harry to continue letting people think he is dead. After all even if he is at odds with Dumbledore because of his past decisions he still needs the old coot to be some help against Voldemort. |
![]() ![]() Never inthe books or movies is he called Hadrian. Why you buthering his name? It's Harry James Potter ! |
![]() ![]() Bela is the oldest read the book. |
![]() ![]() bullshit your story is fucked up susan has been trained for years pansy for 2 month i dont know but a few years will make a better dueler the l,ast 2 chapters have been not well thought out... ask any fighter if a 2 month fighter has a chance in beating someone that been trained forf years |
![]() ![]() i hope you kill that fucking cunt bitch pansey...and make her feel the all the pain that she has given to others... |
![]() ![]() I wish I could also unironically write a love relationship between a 16 year old boy and a woman in her 40s, and say that the adult woman 'is flawed in some ways'. You could've done a Lolita, but fitted in HP universe and roles reversed, a commentary on predatory, manipulative woman controlling an innocent, love-starved boy. But instead this is what you've published. And the fact that this romance is never condemned for the creepy that it is (or lacks a sense of irony), makes me think you need to realign your moral centre while writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is still pedo shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhhh chief, bella is in her 40s. This some pedo shit |