Reviews for Watching Over Harry
Lamorak Korving chapter 1 . 1/1
Yes. Andromeda was one of the few Blacks who were not evil. And as for Bellatrix, I NEVER REALLY
DID consider her to be 100% evil, just misguided. This, being the 1st chapter of the story, looks
really promising. I just hope the rest of the story is just as good!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2024
For a moment I thought this was pacifist Bella. No offense but whenever I filter for Bella fics I want psychopatic romance guilty pleasure, otherwise I'd filter for other pairings. But hey, you did deliver justice at least
mrpietan chapter 1 . 11/21/2024
I humbly ask; are you going to come back tobwriting
MiaCosby chapter 38 . 7/30/2024
This has been a fun read, a few missteps here and there. And i noticed some people pointing out errors which is fair but even with those they weren’t that harmful to the story. Although i do think this harry would’ve wiped the floor with Voldemort. Still really enjoyed this and hope to see you continue writing someday
BarbedCaress chapter 31 . 7/29/2024
An interesting way to dispose of the big D
BarbedCaress chapter 22 . 7/29/2024
Took forever to get to the will reading, but i am mostly pleased with it.
Your Dumbledore is a real bastard.
Looking forward to seeing Molly get everything she deserves.
Bob chapter 38 . 6/10/2024
Its Harry James Potter not Hadrian! Read the Books! Stop butchering a famous persons name its bad luck!
Batros940 chapter 14 . 6/10/2024
I can't help but think Bella's trial been put off until it's revealed that Harry is still alive. Also don't really see a reason for harry to continue letting people think he is dead. After all even if he is at odds with Dumbledore because of his past decisions he still needs the old coot to be some help against Voldemort.
Bob chapter 6 . 6/7/2024
Never inthe books or movies is he called Hadrian. Why you buthering his name? It's Harry James Potter !
Bob chapter 1 . 6/6/2024
Bela is the oldest read the book.
Guest chapter 26 . 5/5/2024
bullshit your story is fucked up susan has been trained for years pansy for 2 month i dont know but a few years will make a better dueler the l,ast 2 chapters have been not well thought out... ask any fighter if a 2 month fighter has a chance in beating someone that been trained forf years
Wantaknow chapter 25 . 5/5/2024
i hope you kill that fucking cunt bitch pansey...and make her feel the all the pain that she has given to others...
Freenore chapter 15 . 4/6/2024
I wish I could also unironically write a love relationship between a 16 year old boy and a woman in her 40s, and say that the adult woman 'is flawed in some ways'.

You could've done a Lolita, but fitted in HP universe and roles reversed, a commentary on predatory, manipulative woman controlling an innocent, love-starved boy. But instead this is what you've published. And the fact that this romance is never condemned for the creepy that it is (or lacks a sense of irony), makes me think you need to realign your moral centre while writing.
Cipher301 chapter 6 . 1/22/2024
This is still pedo shit
Cipher301 chapter 3 . 1/22/2024
Uhhh chief, bella is in her 40s. This some pedo shit
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