Reviews for The Witchery Way
TraSan chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Wow. Just wow. I love how you wrote Jess and the creepiness of the evil behind what happened to Sam was perfect. I'm not sure if I think it was Sam's subconscious conjuring his brother when he needed Dean most, or Sam's laten psychic abilities, or Dean Winchester's very own stubborn streak and protective nature that somehow crossed the threshold, but whatever your intentions, it was well played!

Nicely done.
epex chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I liked the plot of your story, it was very well developed :)
sayrae3times chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
This was just awesome. I love stories with Jess, and the part where Sam finds the magazine I just about jumped out of my seat! I loved this. So very awesome!
carocali chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Really liked this. Even though Dean wasn't REALLY there to talk Sam, I like that Sam glommed onto whatever memories would help him through. Then it was awesome that he really DID show up just to make sure.

Always love to see something pop up from you!


PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Ohhh, this was a fantastic fiction! And what a great lead in to the pilot episode! A definite keeper, dear!


skag trendy chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Great story mate. I really enjoyed how it worked up to the pilot episode, and beyond.

Fantastic job as always.

Kind regards,

ST xxx
Nana56 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
I definitely enjoyed this. Loved how you worked Dean into it. :D My boy had to be there in some form to take care of his little brother. Very clever. :D

It was awesome that he actually showed up, too! Leaving the skin mag as a teaser was soooo Dean.

And this was set right before the pilot. Jess didn't say how soon Halloween was, but she did mention it so it wouldn't be too far away. :D

Very nicely done. :)
Madebyme chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
What a thrilling and captivating read - I really don't know where to start! Not only did you stick to the prompt but you added Dean in a believable and clever way, while also tying in an awesome MOTW and weaving the whole thing into canon! You executed this exceptionally – you must be exhausted!

You know me and my Sam and Jess fascination and I loved seeing glimpses into their everyday life and walks in the parks, I really appreciated that and how they made the decision to move in together there. Lovely touch, such a minute detail but they're the ones I love.

I'm addicted to the way you paint Jess, how some of her characteristics are echoed in Dean; the fierce protectiveness, the worry, humour and her sharp and quick remarks. I never tire of reading your interpretation of her and I loved her reaction to the Busty Asian Beauties mag and that Halloween costume comment was both humorous and heart breaking all at the same time!

Weaving Dean into Sam's subconscious worked really well, having him nudge Sam into finding a way to save himself, pointing him in the right direction. It really spoke a lot about their relationship and how Sam relies on his brother to have his back even even though they're separated. And the skin mag was the perfect choice, Sam knowing Dean was there even though he didn't see him, I loved that detail. The different POVS worked really well too, seeing Dean and Pastor Jim work together behind the scenes to kill the skinwalker.

You did a wonderful job weaving together all your research with the skinwalker (which was fascinating and I agree the prayer did meld with Sam's admissions in HOTH) with canon and Azazel's plan. I really enjoyed the meeting between Brady and Azazel and that gut wrenching order being issued. I've never come across that scene before in a fic and I found it quite fascinating, you did a awesome job with it and even though I knew the order was coming, it was still chilling.

I've been looking forward to reading this and it didn't disappoint, you crammed in so much and it was thoroughly entertaining from start to finish. So, what's next on your writing list? Not that I'm pushing you or anything, expect that I guess I am, I'm just selfish like that! Catch you again soon, take care, Abbi
calcium77 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
That was great ! I I liked seeing Sam and jess's relationship. Usually would not read something with this description but since You wrote it I knew it had to be great... I always love all your stories!
7kstar chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I liked how you kept with cannon and had Dean in the story but not really having the brothers together.

Also a loose tie was neatly tied up. I rather it had been the demon killing Jess but with them changing cannon...your version works.

Nice story and I liked how Sam figured it out with a little help from a friend.
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011




lOVED HOW bRADY CAME TO KILL jESS- AND HOW HE GOT NELSON gawd hun...this was the best damn multi-centred fic ive ever read! I FREAKIN LOVED IT!

you write lika a Winchester fights!
spnMom chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I thought Witchery Way pertained to witch craft... Nice twist.

Thanks for posting.
ritsam chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Simply amazing story. Never read something like this before. The witch was really tricky but Sam defeated him. Great. The most awesome part was...Sam still needs his brothers presence and Dean can't leave his little brother alone. Love it, simple awesam :)

Colby's girl chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Enjoyed the story. I'm not usually interested in Sam/Jess stories but the way this one was written was great. Dean was there and it was still about the Supernatural world.
masondixon chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
As usual with you, a very good job. Liked going back to first season Sam and Dean and having Dean with Sam in his mind and in person was nicely done. Sad to know what is coming at the end but it was a good way to lead to it.

Thank You.
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