|Reviews for Enemies no more|
| SSJ5Gogetenks chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
I think Advance Wars needs more fics. Lash x Sonja is a great pairing, and with the way the internet works, it's quite crazy how their haven't been any M-rated fics between the two. Maybe you could be the first? Judging from this good story, I reckon you could do something like that.
| scoutmasterkb28 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Good for a short one shot. A few things you can do to improve this. You can add some more details and some more description of the situations. Especially the part where an artillery toy hit Sonja, it took me some time to figure that out so maybe you can be more specific in that part.
Another thing is maybe you should change the rating to T or something. K is a bit too young for this but it's up to you.