Reviews for meetings in the coffee shop at midnight
Mrs. 11th chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Coffee shops at midnight, I like that!
thelilacfield chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Originality: 3/5

Creativity: 2/5

Canon Personalities: 4/5

Grammar And Spelling: 4/5

Overall Story: 4/5

Total: 17/25
combeferring chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Mad, this was really good. I love your James to pieces and I liked the realistic portrayal.

AND HE DRIVES. Oh, it was so wonderful, the way magic-muggle things was all weaved in and Jessica being a squib was fantastic.

The only thing I would say, is Jessica introduces herself as "Brittany Wang" and at all other times she's referred to as Jessica. I don't know if I'm missing something or what, but apart from that I loved this and I think you did a brilliant job. Well done! :)
mirage888 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
BAM! My mind has been blown with the potential awesomeness of this couple xD As James seems a bit cocky, a sarcastic girl who can help him see the other side of life is probably JUST what he needs. He could ease her discomfort with the muggle world as well, just by the way he marvels at it. The only slightly awkward thing is that their parents tried to date lol. Brava!
Arianna4President chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Wow, that was seriously cool! I'd never pictured them as a couple, but they could work! Great job! :D