Reviews for Sherlock, just one touch
Theodora Helena Miller chapter 7 . 1/18/2012
Adorable fluff-ness. Continue?
AAKK47 chapter 7 . 1/3/2012
I love these snippets into Sherlock and Johns lives.

All of them are very well written and well within character.

The last especially is very sweet.

as a side not on a few occasions in these fics you wrote 'hart' where it should be 'heart'.

It is a small thing but i had to point it out (random crap like that bugs me, sorry)

You are a good writer and i look forward to reading more from you in the future.


Paradise221B chapter 7 . 12/3/2011
Very very cute and fluffy! Just how i like it!
mustangwoman chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
That was truly lovely. Wonderfully descriptive and heartwarming. I just realized that I joined this story at the end and look forward to clicking the "prev" button and enjoying the rest. Thank you for sharing this!
VG Jekyll chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Fix the lay out: If a sentence starts on a new line, make it a new paragraph. About 3 sentences in one paragraph is fine.

There are stupid typo's that can easily be fixed. 'John' without a capital, 'heart' without a e.

I though it coudl be interested, but ater reading 3 chapters it couldnt hold my interest anymore. Mostly because the lay-out was too distracting.
Jeg er meg chapter 6 . 4/23/2011
'S me again XD

I'm in love with these drabbles of yours, really. Especially the way you write John here, being all coy and sly.

I do have a tiny thing to pick on: In the first sentence, I think it'll be better to write 'Sherlock and I' instead of 'me and Sherlock'. It's a tiny correction, really.
Jeg er meg chapter 5 . 4/23/2011
I loved it. The discussion between the two is so them! You keep writing ;)
XMillieX chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
I love how he had to "check" everything before using it. That had me giggling. Lucky John. I want a tea-making Sherlock.

221bbakerst can't log in chapter 6 . 4/11/2011
Very cute and fluffy. :D Well done, lovely.

Just one thing, 'heart' is spelt with an 'e'. :)

Jazz chapter 6 . 4/11/2011
Awh wow! So beautifully and romantically written! Will there be more? More please! :)
OryonUK chapter 6 . 4/11/2011
*thud* erm yes. Who knew covering a yellow mentor could be so erotic?

I think there were some minor spelling mistakes but I will be honest, I couldn't care because that was

HOT! Well done John for taking initiative :D

Wish I had some suggestions but I'm useless at making decisions so I will simply enjoy whatever you come up with ( it's worked so far)
Maugreyfiliae chapter 5 . 4/4/2011
I don't think you offended everyone: I mean, people who are ready to read slash are usually quite open-minded. and after all, I believe most readers live in democracies, and they know the most important right that comes along with the freedom of speech: the right not to listen, or not to read, opinions you don't agree with or that would offense you.

And I speak from personal experience, so to say: I like reading slash stories, at least when it comes to the Sherlock BBC show, and yet I have been in an heterosexual relationship (with the same man) for over four years now, and never experienced any homosexual relationship before this). And I usually read texts from authors I would not agree with, just for the sake of information, or to broaden my perspectives.

Actually, I think you had a pretty brilliant idea with this theme... besides, I like how Sherlock manipulated John in such an easy way at the end, and how John let him do even though he saw clear in his acting!
XMillieX chapter 5 . 4/4/2011
i don't think hell could cope with Sherlock. They'd kick him out.

Very sweet. You write conversation very fluidly.

Maugreyfiliae chapter 4 . 3/22/2011
I am really grateful to you for updating (and thanks for what you wrote in your review reply, I take it as a great compliment).

I think your description of the scene is just perfect: I would not take a single word out of it, nor add another one.

And I like the fact that they never say they love each other...the closest we get of a declaration is what John reads in Sherlock's eyes at the end. I would just that the word "lover" at the beginning surprised me a little bit...after all, we did not know yet that they were lovers, but since it announced what came next, I would say it remains a good choice of words.

Besides, I like the opposition between the familiar, comfortable of this chapter, and the electric, dramatic tension of the third chapter.

I think I shall read your other Sherlock story soon!
LIGHTNSHADOWS chapter 3 . 3/11/2011

Fantastic series of one shot & I really think you should continue. Thanks,LnS
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