Reviews for Up
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
Wow that was really good. I like the Alice Parks twist. Maybe you'll elaborate on her story and why she cared about Peter\Neal?
SylverSpyder chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
I wish Alice was real. I like her a lot. What a wonderful OC. The dynamic is there.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
A little ghost story wrapped up in a terrific h/c package - loved it!
leeluluirty chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I like the twist at the end :D Awesome story!
W0lf-Spirit chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
That was... really really awesome. I usually don't like supernatural thrown in but things like this... That was fantastic. Seriously fantastic.
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
interesting... what happened to alice parks?
BlueDiamondStar chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
oh my, how i loved this small piece! :)
Neal whump is always great reading material
HAMUCHA chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Speechless. Creepy? Hmm. At least she visited one last time. No so creepy after that.
ellesbelles2009 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
oooh spookily cool :)
leahk80 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
nicely done!
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Nice twist, I enjoyed this one
Post U Later chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Aww How Sweet~! Peter's Old Partner Just Saved Neal, Peter's New Partner! I Think It'd Be Cool If Neal Drew A Picture Of Her In Her Yellow Dress With The Red Stains. I Bet That'd Freak Peter Out A Bit. Huh? X3
True Love Lives Forever chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Great job!
kenziecaffrey chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
I loved this. So much. You don't even know.
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
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