Reviews for Delicate
Just Sus chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
OK... This totally made me cry!
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Oh, this was really heartbreaking! He is obviously so in love with her, but apparently can't give her what she thinks she wants. What can Mr. Perfect Life provide that real love with Edward can't? You should really continue this and make it into a full-length story! It would be so good!
Rhixoxo chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Speechless that was really touching and you could just feel edward's emotion in everything
twilight-saga-lover95 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Really sad! This could totally be a full length story! I'd read it! :)
fourbrats chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
This was just plain sad and I am not sure I understand what she was thinking when she couldn't just stay with him. You could probably turn this into another amazing long story if you wanted...hint hint. LOL
My Friend Alice chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
This is only a OS? I can see where this could be so much more. Great opening.
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Hey I found your stories by someone that rec'd! WOW this is very sad and that she is with someone else! You almost don't know if its Edwards pov or Edward is who she is getting Married to. Great writing! Going to read your other stories :o) Chilly x
daisyjustfailed chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
i loved your story

it made me sad...

... ok i admit it, a little teary as well

hell, who am i kidding? it really made me cry

im a softy, so what?

but back to my point, it was amazing
Silent-Heart22 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
I read this while listening to the song...tugged my heart very beautiful. Kinda want to know what happens next :)
Rachaelc1994 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
At first I didn't understand it, then when it got to the end everything made sense. I loved it.
justwanttoread chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Loved this! It made me sad for him.

Could this have a few chapters in it - go back a bit and then forward some? I would read it!
zeeber chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Looking forward to the new story...
Lauren James chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Awww, poor Edward! Such a beautiful O/S - really lovely and I cannot wait till 'I Love You More'!

Best wishes!
jessieclow3 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
NoLongerInUse-DeleteAccount chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I've heard this song before, but never truly appreciated it like I did while reading this amazing o/s.

Thank you!
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