Reviews for The Fall and Rise of Bella SwanBlack
Skullqueencb chapter 17 . 9/13
I am sorry but I can no longer read this story. It started off really good and it keep my internet but the last few chapters have had bits and pices that did not make sense at all for this story and just now in this chapter you change how she gave birth to the twins from a natural birth to a c section. I could not stand it. Sorry.
acetwolf94 chapter 20 . 3/28
Wait I thought the vampire would be Edward not Alec. ADD MORE PLEASE! REALLY GOOD!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/9
Is the unknown Edward Cullen?
Destineyofme chapter 20 . 12/14/2015
I hope you will one day write more. How did Alec even know about Bella back when she was a baby
mum2shane chapter 20 . 8/3/2015
are you going to finish?
MysticTopaz6293 chapter 20 . 1/7/2015
I'm loving your writing. I can't wait for your next update!

Mystictopaz
revinabluemoon chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
um i think i just mite kill charlie very painfully and slowlly .
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 20 . 10/26/2013
love it

Can't wait for next chapter. Also what happened to Charlie.
I heart vamps chapter 20 . 8/2/2013
Please update soon
Mist17 chapter 20 . 6/11/2013
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!
jessikaC123 chapter 20 . 4/5/2013
i love it all, and i was hoping you could start this story up again
LlOoUuIiSsEe chapter 20 . 1/12/2013
Please continue
Ezmathet chapter 20 . 9/5/2012
Love this story, great plot line. Are you planning on updating it anytime soon?
Mrs.Volturi chapter 18 . 4/14/2012
its fucking edward... damn doushbagging ass hole, god i hate edward wish i could slit his throught with a wearwolf tooth!
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