|Reviews for Kyoya's Glasses|
| Angelic potato chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
| KathrenCullen18 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
That was soooooo cute! :D
| Hell's Angel-Heaven's Demon chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Wah! So adorable! And very well written and in character ! Hehe I loved it! D
Thanks for writing!
| polychloride chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
That was so cute! I love Tamaki's obsession with glasses-less kyouya XD
| OldAccount2012 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
This is Sheska btw.
First things first, this is actually rather good and cute. I enjoyed it more than I thought I would and I am glad I did read it. They do make a rather fine couple.
Now on to other things, I noticed as I was reading a slight glitch to your grammar. "Sighing, Kyoya got up and walked into the sitting room. Tamaki kept playing, but Kyoya knew he was there." It's mainly the "Kyoya knew he was there" part. We are reading the story currently from his POV so it doesn't make sense. I think you meant something more along the lines of "Tamaki kept playing, but Kyoya knew that he knew he was there." or something similar to it. The way it is worded now makes it seem like Kyoya is thinking that Tamaki is there when he already knows that. Make sense? I hope it does.
Another thing, the way you have the story set up is rather nice with the spaces between paragraphs and quotes but maybe make it a bit nicer with no spaces between paragraphs unless its a POV change. It would make it easier to read and we would know to expect a POV change.
Also, the way it is set up is a bit confusing when it was a day change. Maybe put some sort of divider to show that time has passed and the two paragraphs are not the same. Such as: "Everything would be fine when they came to school tomorrow.
-69- or some other symbol
It was lunch hour. Kyoya hadn't been in school all day. Tamaki was hounding the twins." and also maybe use - to show shifts in the day and time changes. Something small like that would help with the readability I would think. Other than those little nitpicks, I think this is really good and I really like it too and will most definitely fave it and add you to my list.
| zutarakid50 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Aww! So cute! You wrote this very well and everyone was so in character. Great job! :D
Kyoya and Tamaki were very sweet. I loved the scenes with just the two of them in Kyoya's house.
| Z.Romance chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
This is extremely well-written and in-character. I loved it, and I can easily imagine it being an actual chapter in the show -.
And, it's wonderful how you ended everything on an up-beat, light-hearted note. Everything makes me want to read more.
| yaoi-addict-07 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
OMG first Tama/Kyo fanfic and it was awesome!
| VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
LOL, such a Kyoya way to end things! I really appreciated that about the fic XD Poor Tamaki, he really had a struggle in this one. You can't help but admire Kyoya's style, though! 8D Love it!
| IllusionaryMagician chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Ehehehe! That was so cute :3 I really like this pair 3! Very well done! :) heh, i like fluff way to much XD awesome job!