|Reviews for After the Storm|
| PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/9
Hot and sweet. Jacob is amazing. Bella will be better now and they will talk about loss. This was nice, there is hope and peace in spite of her pain.
| Zapphe chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Great one off story :)
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Aww! Im glad jake could distract her!
| If You Do Not Know Me chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I love a little Jacob & Bella! I love that Jacob is the comfort & sun to Bella in her darkest time! Jake is so wonderful! Lucky Bella!
| PBF chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Well, if that was 'icky het sex,' then you should do it more often. It was really beautiful. I love the imagery you used at the beginning.
| angelinastefany chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Bravo Great one shot you'r only the second story that i can truly say even deserves the praise. good work!
| Tim C. Girl chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Wow, that's a powerful story... Heavy and slow and perfect :) I could feel Bella's grief, her need to feel ANYTHING else.. And Jacob's willingness to help, despite it not being the perfect situation he surely dreamt of.
It's a beautiful oneshot. Wish you'd write more of this pairing :)
| chele681 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
While I'm so very sad that you sad to kill off Charlie in order to being them together, I'm so very glad to see this beautifully written connection between Bella and Jacob.
Well done. Thank you for sharing it.
| Korissaa chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I'm not a big Bella Jake fan, but I read it beacuse it was you writing it. It's beautiful bb.
It's sweet and sad and healing. Two people lives and souls enterwined. The balance was nice too. Not too intense, but enough love to pull and keep you in.
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Icky het sex, had to snigger. that was lovely. xx
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Ahhh, lovely, and very "you" in style. I like the way you pulled it all together, a small window into a larger world.
| Fr333bird chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Lovely :) beautifully written and very touching. What a sweet Jake xx
| malleelee chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Dealing with pain using a means that usually requires justification - At least they didn't go out and hook up with the first pretty face available.
The wisdom of Keeping it in the family depends on the family.
| teleshawna chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Lovely. Thank you.
| Tlcatlady chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Really very sweet, but I think I'm too into slash lately to really love the het stuff.
I do love Jacob though...maybe we need more of something like Jacob/Jasper ;) TLC