|Reviews for Another Day in Paradise|
| lilbit1016 chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
| marymo9 chapter 3 . 4/16/2011
AAGGHHH, I can't believe you ended this here...but I am grateful for the piece, even if it was too short. Please continue to do this pairing. There really aren't enough stories about them,and few are done as well as yours.
| ShadowCub chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
Wonder what Scotty is gonna do if they ever get married.
| lyssaspeakgood chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
your original story, and this companion piece, are brilliant and I've enjoyed reading them
| starbuckjade chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
Oh you can't end it here! I want to know what the trouble is. I want more memory sharing.
Just more of this couple. They are adorable together and you write so beautifully. Please consider writing more chapters or even a sequel. I'd love to read more.
| Avarenda chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
Aw, i wouldnt have minded another long story about Jean/Emma but if this is the end i'll just have to deal.
You always write wonderful things, Another Day in Paradise not excluded. Keep up the good work.
| IxHeartxGlee chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
I loved it. The intimacy they share is amazing.
I noticed at the end it said *The End* does that mean this is finished?
Thanks for sharing and take care!
| k chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
| CrimsonCat chapter 2 . 3/8/2011
'Underneath it All' continues to be my favourite X-Men story of all time. I was thrilled to see you writing in this fandom again 3
You give the characters such life! The dialouge is hilarious, and sweet, and there aren't words for how much I adore this continuation. I'm vaguely hopeful that you will continue beyond the three parts. Maybe use this to start another epic(ly) amazing story surrounding these two stunning women that you write so well. Also, vaguely hopeful that with the next X-Men movie drawing closer and closer it'll spawn more gems like this.
I love Emma so much, and the way you write her makes my heart happy. More soon, please. Pretty please. With a cherry on top, and everything.
| minako366 chapter 2 . 3/5/2011
"Touch me and you'll spend the rest of your life barking at cars and peeing on fire hydrants," Emma declared, suddenly turning to lance Kitty with her piercing blue eyes. "Something in the terrier family I think. They're yappy, aren't they?"
Haha I LOVE Emma
| AlexRyzlinGold chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
I loved 'Underneath It All' and I'm loving this. Keep up the very good work. :)
| Cold War Transmissions chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
Oh my god. You are just amazing. I was so excited when I saw a sequel to Underneath It All, one of my favourite fanfics. I admire your work and hope for more of this story!
| RogueFreak chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
Thank you for continuing with this story I absolutely love under neath it all and I can't wait for the next chapter of this _
| Pieman3 chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
I think Emma might be a bad influence on Jean.
Sequel is going great, love the banter between Jean and Emma.
Little dissapontied that these chapters have been so short but definently looking forward to the updates.
| primrosered chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
I daresay you're as witty as Joss Whedon. I have so many 'lol' moments in this chapter. Your version of Emma is brilliant. Emma/anyone here is brilliant! I love their dynamics.