|Reviews for What if I Told You|
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 14 . 5/7
Wow, great story. I sure hope there's a sequel waiting for me.:-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
| Angellovee chapter 7 . 2/19
I hope this doesn't backfire.
| Angellovee chapter 4 . 2/18
I know Charlie was hurting and just trying to hurt Edwards feeling but that was rough.
I'm glad Edward stood up to him. One defeat and he would have always treated him the same way.
| Angellovee chapter 2 . 2/18
Good. He needed to admit that it hurt, that he was wrong.
Now he needs to tell Bella.
| Angellovee chapter 1 . 2/18
I've never gone from laughing so hard to crying my eyes out. I love you! :'(
| ChristyWIX chapter 14 . 4/23/2017
That drama was much better and completely part of the story. Speaking of story . . . where is the rest of it? This is marked complete but, it isn't competed. I like that she is now one of them. I love that she's got complete control of everything right away. Well, except that temper! Whew, she nearly took Carlisle's head off with that outburst. Sheesh. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here.
| ChristyWIX chapter 13 . 4/23/2017
Well that was a ridiculous amount of unnecessary drama. Yawn.
| ChristyWIX chapter 12 . 4/23/2017
That was absolutely beautiful. They finally got back to themselves and gave into the passion. I loved that it was several times for both of them. That they shared the afternoon with his family afterwards. Charlie was quite the pill. Wonder why Edward can't hear this guy? And, I am guessing that Alice can't see him either? Or, she would've seen this happening. Poor Edward will be beside himself for leaving her unattended. Which quite frankly he should feel bad. They loved know that these vamps are after her. Speaking of that, shouldn't they all be out patrolling, instead of sitting around visiting back at the Cullen's? Rathe irresponsible of them all, if you ask me. They've all failed her now. When she needs them the most.
| ChristyWIX chapter 11 . 4/23/2017
Wow, first I was surprised that Jake wasn't fuming angry standing there with the tribe, that his thoughts were calm. Then, you made me even more surprised with him maintaining control when he met Edward at the treaty line. To learn that Jacob respect the Cullen's was quite something. That he's accepted that Bella will be one of them someday, amazing. I did like that he was willing to investigate further on his end and meet him again if needed. That Edward made him realize that Sam had not phased in quite a while and that angered Jake. Very surprising chapter. Even the very minute progress Edward and Bella made in him letting her know this was not him making choices for her. It was him making choices for his family, their family. She was mad, yet understood. I just worry, if all the Cullen's and Denali's are out hunting and Edward is with Jake, who is watching Bella at her house?
| ChristyWIX chapter 10 . 4/23/2017
I'm glad that Bella finally let Edward talk and explain how he tricked his family into thinking that they broke up amicably. Alice admitting she saw and heard it all, yet stayed true to Edward because he'd never once asked this of any of them. Still doesn't excuse her. I think that is harder to forgive. That she knew and s isn't tell the rest of the family what Edward had done. I don't think any of them, including Rose, would've left if they'd known the truth. I've got to say I'm so glad that Edward is truly kissing Bella in your story. No closed mouth kisses and being chaste. He's really going for it this time around. Loved the lime you served up. Her mortification over the wet spot. Alice's text letting him know he's a perv and that she left clothes, was fun. I'm so glad that Bella wasn't taking Tanya's crap. That almost year, has very much made Bella so much stronger. She's not putting up with anybody's crap anymore. I almost feel sorry for Jake, almost, when inevitably she comes face to face with him. I don't think he'll stand a chance around her. She may rip him a new asshole for trying shit with her, when he knew she'd mated with Edward. Knowingnthat eventually he'll imprint with someone else so, how could he do that to her.
| ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 4/23/2017
I really wish Alice hadn't interrupted Edward's perusal of himself, lost in the fantasy of Bella. That was all kinds of sexy. I'm happy they explained what was going on with the tribe and the rogue vampires. Her reaction was odd, walking away down their drive. What she screamed at Edward made sense, as once again she's thrust into something that is not in her control. I was very glad he told her that when she is ready, he wants to change her. That he wants forever. She didn't like hearing it but, I did. She could always say to Jake, when he tries to tell them they broke the treaty by telling her, that she figured it all out from his ramblings years ago. Then use that as her excuse as to why she never wanted him in that way. Going further to say, she knows that she eventually will be just like them and the thought of being with a werewolf nearly destroyed her inside. That was why she stayed away, because she figured it all out. She has to learn how to lie eventually, why not start there, right? Saying she figured the Cold Ones out, thanks to his story, so it only meant that their tribe were the werewolves. It was not hard to put two and two together. He may buy that and it would protect the Cullen's form their stupid war threat. They can protect Charlie. As a matter of fact, have Charlie there when they have to shift into their wolf forms, have him see this and realize there is more. I'm sure as long as Charlie has been hanging around with Billy, he's heard the same story too man times himself. Wouldn't take him but a minute to put two and two together. I'm glad she got angry with the Cullen's. She needed that in her healing. Loved the way she spoke to Rose. You really can't pick the human qualities we all end up with.
| ChristyWIX chapter 8 . 4/23/2017
I was hoping with Emmett's bat hanging on Bella's truck door, that it meant he and/or Rosalie fixed her seatbelt. I guess it hasn't been. It isn't like any of them to forget that. The fact that it is Esme and Carlisle that know about the broken belt, one would think they'd have mentioned it to Rosalie at the very least. I digress. I'd forgotten about Jake. Figured with all the drama over her and Edward mending themselves, that was enough. Adding Jake in, seems overkill. Especially because Jake clearly wants Bella for himself, that was evident in the meeting they had with the counsel. Bella not wanting Edward right now, will be taken the very wrong way by Jake. Nobody bothered to explain that mates are the same, if not stronger, than imprints. I never understand why that was never brought up strongly enough in THE books. So, with your rewritten version, I was really hoping it was brought up and clarified for the elders. Edward's instant reaction during the meeting showed he's still stuck on stupid when it comes to Bella and letting her choose her way. I hope his coming to her house will be him explains what is happening. Letting her voice what she wants to voice. More importantly, choose what she wants to do about it.
| ChristyWIX chapter 7 . 4/23/2017
We knew she wouldn't let him back into her heart right away. She's closed off that heart of hers and stored it away tightly. It'll take him months to break through to her. She wants and loves him, will want and love him forever. However, she doesn't trust him and that there is the crux of it. How do you open your heart to someone you can no longer trust. Especially knowing how bad you handled it the first time around. Have you ever read the one where Edward tries to dump Bella in the woods and she tells him no? She demands a counsel with his family. Then demands a court hearing be held with his family during that meeting. He tries to get the family to move and they all refuse. She wants Rosalie to be the judge, Emmett is the bailiff. It is very well written and quite funny through the drama. Don't remember the name, but it was really good.
| ChristyWIX chapter 6 . 4/23/2017
I liked this chapter. It was good that she got to see each of them in different environments. Not at their home. Not at hers. So glad that Rosalie sees Bella differently now. Accepts her. Emmett being calm and caring, in lieu of his normal loud and funny, was perfect. Jasper was quite the surprise. Loved that scene the most. His hugging Bella until she kicked and screamed it out of her was cathartic. The way you played Alice and Bella was good. Aging them run and hug each other after such heartbreak is never believable. It worked in THE books, because Alice had that vision and they were on borrowed time. This is more realistic. Their anger was good. Alice never stopped watching Bella and she knew she never moved on in her life, that it fell apart. That pissed Alice off. Although, I think that anger should be placed at Edward's feet, not Bella's. Bella's anger was justified. She left and never stayed in contact. Even just an email would've helped Bella move on, I think. Perhaps that was why Alice didn't respond. Either way, Alice hurt Bella as much as Edward hurt Bella, just differently.
| ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 4/23/2017
Bella was spectacular in this. I wanted her to throw in that Edward left to protect her. Even though that little slip would've raised more questions in Charlie's mind. I really liked that she said she'd go to the Cullen's. She knows they'd have her in a red hot minute. So does Charlie, and that scared him. Her yelling that she's an adult isn't really conducive to being one but, she got the message through to Charlie. I very much liked the strength that she demonstrated here.