Reviews for Hominid's Brother
John Yeller chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Even though this (short) story lacks moral detail,it counters that fact with a good storyline!
FlyingStrawberry chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
This story is rather confusing, you need to write it in a way that the reader would understand too.

Also when you are writing if the number is not a double digit number such as 10 it should be written in letters.

For example: 2 should be two.