Reviews for Beyond Reach
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
This was a good poem to read.

I really liked the changes in tone as Anakin grows up and is trained by Obi-Wan, as well as the choices he made that eventually led to his fall to the dark side.

Good poem. I thought I saw a grammatical mistakes with the line "and it will be there." I think you could take out the "and", but I'm confused as to whether this will mess up the rest of the poem's structure.

Either way, I enjoyed reading this poem. Good work.

-Aria Breuer
charliebrown1234 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Lovely. I really liked it. The slight hints to what Anakin was going through really made it for me, as did the different names that he gave Obi-Wan. Really nice work.

~charliebrown1234
Azalea.Rose chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
That was a good take on Anakin's inner strugle, it showed it well.
nici-kitty chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Wow! Very deep. I especially liked the line 'it hurts to die you know'. Very nice work :)