Reviews for Unexpected visitors
anna chapter 7 . 5/23/2016
kill them:)
emmett cullen chapter 5 . 5/10/2016
please review
vivian chapter 7 . 12/30/2015
pleeeeeeaaaaase kill jess lauren and mike
pretty please with cherry on top
JOHN D chapter 7 . 9/17/2015
OMG PLEASE WRITE MORE. I think the Volturi agree that they can stay human; but they have to have some of their memory erased and the three kids keep going after Bella and Edward.
awesomeness chapter 7 . 1/7/2015
Make the three suffer...and hrry up and update
ObsessiveReader15 chapter 7 . 7/27/2014
I agree fully with Litt'lVampx. I am waitin for you to update. It's been ages. Have the volturi kill them. (Not the cullens)
OG.Sin chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
Plz have them killed
Litt'lVampx chapter 7 . 10/13/2013
WHY THE HELL DID U STOP?!
. .WRITING.!
I AM WAITING ! ! ! ! !
Well. . .why don't u put some of their stupidity a litt'l more and then they got change but they slipped up -due to their obvious clumsiness and stupidity- and break the major rule (the Cullen have no bussiness w/ them anymore )and the Volturi come after them (them I mean Jess,Mike,Lauren only). But when they're about to be killed, they trying to convince the top three Volturi.
Really, I want, no. . .NEED u to continue this story !
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeee /\
AliceCullen0629 chapter 7 . 9/22/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
TheForgottenUser chapter 7 . 7/17/2013
You could keep Lauren as a vampire and then kill her after her continuous advances on Edward
Nooneisstaringatyou chapter 7 . 6/6/2013
Changed plz update soon :)
aisha chapter 7 . 5/8/2013
i want to tell that you are a good writer and you shouldn't involved do as this,cullens can reject thier request and they agreed by cullen's forcefully.
try this i am aslo a writer and my friends love my story endings.
love you and try this !
catch you soon with new series.
Angela chapter 7 . 1/8/2013
Changed
LileyClement chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
WTF! that it write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzz!
babydollsruleall chapter 7 . 6/22/2012
I'd say let the vultori come and kill sometimes get on my nerves.
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