|Reviews for Unexpected visitors|
| Emmy chapter 7 . 6/27
I strongly think that they should brainwash them and let them live without them knowing. I really wish that you’d continue this story!
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/4
I hate when people promise things and don't deliver. Meaning YOU.
| anna chapter 7 . 5/23/2016
| emmett cullen chapter 5 . 5/10/2016
| vivian chapter 7 . 12/30/2015
pleeeeeeaaaaase kill jess lauren and mike
pretty please with cherry on top
| JOHN D chapter 7 . 9/17/2015
OMG PLEASE WRITE MORE. I think the Volturi agree that they can stay human; but they have to have some of their memory erased and the three kids keep going after Bella and Edward.
| awesomeness chapter 7 . 1/7/2015
Make the three suffer...and hrry up and update
| ObsessiveReader15 chapter 7 . 7/27/2014
I agree fully with Litt'lVampx. I am waitin for you to update. It's been ages. Have the volturi kill them. (Not the cullens)
| OG.Sin chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
Plz have them killed
| Litt'lVampx chapter 7 . 10/13/2013
WHY THE HELL DID U STOP?!
I AM WAITING ! ! ! ! !
Well. . .why don't u put some of their stupidity a litt'l more and then they got change but they slipped up -due to their obvious clumsiness and stupidity- and break the major rule (the Cullen have no bussiness w/ them anymore )and the Volturi come after them (them I mean Jess,Mike,Lauren only). But when they're about to be killed, they trying to convince the top three Volturi.
Really, I want, no. . .NEED u to continue this story !
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 7 . 9/22/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| TheForgottenUser chapter 7 . 7/17/2013
You could keep Lauren as a vampire and then kill her after her continuous advances on Edward
| Nooneisstaringatyou chapter 7 . 6/6/2013
Changed plz update soon :)
| aisha chapter 7 . 5/8/2013
i want to tell that you are a good writer and you shouldn't involved do as this,cullens can reject thier request and they agreed by cullen's forcefully.
try this i am aslo a writer and my friends love my story endings.
love you and try this !
catch you soon with new series.
| Angela chapter 7 . 1/8/2013