|Reviews for Missed Oppertunitiesd|
| Cardboard Bike chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
This is an interesting plot, but it doesn't really seem complete. There's a sentence near the start that slips into first person.
I really like the line about Iruka being a background person in his own life.
| maethebellydancer chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
| Ryu Earth chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I really do wish that there was more to this! I think that it would make a wonderful romance! ;
Either way though, I am glad that you posted it here! I really enjoy reading it! )