|Reviews for Lesser evil|
| Balrog Roike chapter 30 . 5/3/2017
And then he forgot that he was clothed in black and got shot down in the next town...
No, seriously, awesome story.
I'd love to see the companion piece and more about the admirable bastard that is Zero and Jeb Cain learning the ways of the world.
| Balrog Roike chapter 27 . 5/3/2017
"Binding oaths"? Those words get a lot more intersting and important of you add an actual Sorceress to them.
Am I bad if I like Zero and his army by now? I mean, he's still an asshole and all - but he's a capable one (always a good point in my books), actually loved by his troops (might just break older Cain's brain, should he learn of it) and he's clearly not the worst thing running around. And he passed the sanity check by knowing that eternal darkness is bad (and not sustainable), not something that happens often with evil goons.
By now I'd love to him and his army to meet/team up with DG and Cain and what happens then. Or help with something even more evil somehow and earn themselves a pardon somehow. (Curse you for making the villain likeable in a "god, what an asshole"-way.)
| Balrog Roike chapter 21 . 5/3/2017
I just imagine a meeting now:
"So, our queen has just announced her newest plan... Captain? How feasible is it and more importantly, how survivable is it?" "Eh, I give it a fifty-fifty chance, general. The odds to survive it though..." "Alright. Let's do our best to lower it to a at least thirty-seventy chance of pulling it off, subtly, of course. Maybe try to interest her in some less deadly alternatives...?" "Got some ideas, boss." "Great. Now, anything from the front?" "Three new butchered cadets, sir." "Damn those rebels. I'll inform the families right away. Any ideas for a fitting revenge?" "Got some." "Then go for it."
| Brievel chapter 3 . 2/18/2016
Perhaps liking - and rereading - a story so full of carnage and cursing and cruelty makes me a bad person, but I'm in the mood to do some damage and this is the next best thing.
| Brievel chapter 30 . 9/16/2015
Okra's Razor. xD
You probably have no intention of writing the sequel that you mention here at the end, but if you ever do, you've got at least one reader ready and waiting...
| Brievel chapter 29 . 9/16/2015
*grumbles* I hate Zero, especially when he sounds like General Veers...
| Brievel chapter 25 . 9/15/2015
...so I turn the page and keep reading.
| Brievel chapter 24 . 9/15/2015
I need to go to bed, I need to go to bed, I need to go to bed...
| Brievel chapter 16 . 9/15/2015
*quietly adds Fitzalan to my list of Malicean-men with which to make off*
| Brievel chapter 14 . 9/15/2015
I do so enjoy techno-babble, even when I really only understand half of it...
| Brievel chapter 9 . 9/15/2015
Heawl. Now that sounds familiar... ah yes, beefy stormtrooper sergeant, putting the fear of Veers in a certain slimy commander... seems to be a similar relationship here, too...
| Brievel chapter 8 . 9/15/2015
*insert accusatory tone here* You know, I really rather detest Zero, and in this fic, you've made him almost likable.
*mumbles* What is it with this girl and warming me up to the characters I despise...
| Brievel chapter 6 . 9/15/2015
Not to mention the shock-stick at the end of the movie, and the bullet in the shoulder...
| Brievel chapter 5 . 9/15/2015
I should be... well, I *should* be working. I set myself to writing my own Tin Man fic. And yet here I am, reading yours again. You're a distraction, you know that?
| Brievel chapter 4 . 6/19/2015
...eep! 0_0 Up to your usual edge-of-the-seat suspense standard, I see...