Reviews for Thou wouldst be great
visitor chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Would love to see more additions, good job very well written!
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Interesting piece... interesting OC! I'd kinda like to see an second chapter to this; to read her reaction to hearing about his Agni Kai with Zuko and his first encounter with the Avatar, and to his promotion to Advmiral. And of course, her reaction when she finds out that his failed plan resulted in the deaths of thousands (perhaps hundreds of thousands) of troops, and he'll go down in history as a national disgrace-if he goes down in history at all. (Zhao was never mentioned by name in seasons 2 and 3, my ATLA Missing Moments drabble "Suitable Punishment" suggests why.)