Reviews for An Unanticipated Detour
Briar Ruler chapter 1 . 12/22/2016
I like the way you write Teal’c point of view, it’s both interesting and seems in character.
Also the Ori vs Harry Dresden, sounds like it could be bloody hilarious.
Plus Outsiders are creep and I wouldn’t want the Trust or anything like it getting their hands on Trainee wizards. I wonder what the White Court would think of the Wraith?
So I liked this, it’s good as a standalone but a sequel would be cool?
thewingedmoose chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
Nicely done! This was brilliant, thank you
ARandomGuy24 chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
You have so many stories. Can I have the title to sequel to this one?
majorshane chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
This story gives me Goosebumps. The technology and resources of the SGC and its allies helping Dresden and the gang against the Reds, and the White Council providing assistance against the Ori? Match made in heaven.

Unless one of the Queens were to sta5rt making deals with the Ori? Yikes!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Bowser Jr's Descendant chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
This is the second time I've read this, and I loved it both times. I'll just say I would love to see this storyline somehow developed further, especially the idea of Teal'c, Michael Carpenter, and of course Harry having to work together against some combined threat.
It's good as a stand-alone, though.
-Philowen Aster
SpiralEater chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
I really loved this. There was a profound sense of respect for the characters and settings of two very different settings with none of the too common posturing less graceful writers tend to shoehorn in. If you ever continue this I'd sincerely love to see more.
Mr.Bookworm85 chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
Captures what little I know of Stargate and what I know of Dresden Files.
ZecoreZecron chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Well, I can't say what I want to because I'm in a public place and it is kinda hard to type it, but it goes something like "FLabalgahmoarohmygod that was awesome!" or something to that affect.
seinka chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Awesome story, I love it!
Description of the wizards from Teal'c's perspective is just amazing. And Harry's business card is the best moment in here.
By the way, I would really, really like to know what Luccio saw in Teal'c during the soulgaze and what she thought. :)
Todeswind chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Very good, flows well and you knew when to end it. Impressive.
MisterD8a chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
That's it. Oh I hope there is more.

simys chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Sweet Nice Fight seen
Thaumh chapter 1 . 7/8/2012


I likey! I especially like how Harry is mentioned only in passing, and not actually in this story. You could do more (and I'm sure many of us including me would love you to do so), but you don't *need* to. This is a perfect if tantalizing little stand-alone.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Heya JB,

just re-read this story, and I have to say it's one I would love to see continued. So, if puppy dog eyes would help your muse, consider my baby blues in full floppy eared puppy mode.

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